[mpls] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-mpls-mldp-multi-topology-05

Roni Even via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Fri, 03 May 2024 06:20 UTC

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Date: Thu, 02 May 2024 23:20:37 -0700
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Subject: [mpls] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-mpls-mldp-multi-topology-05

Reviewer: Roni Even
Review result: Ready with Nits

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Document: draft-ietf-mpls-mldp-multi-topology-??
Reviewer: Roni Even
Review Date: 2024-05-02
IETF LC End Date: 2024-05-02
IESG Telechat date: 2024-05-16

Summary:
The document is ready for publication as a standard track rfc with nits

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:
1. This document is using the few types from iana fed type name space registry.
I think that the Iana section should ask to update the registry pointing to
this document and verify that all fields in the relevant entries are not
changed 2. The document is using 8 bits from the MT IP address for the IPA
field. Should this document title say that it updates RFC7307 or specify how to
prevent different use of these reserved bits?

[mpls] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-mpls… Roni Even via Datatracker
[mpls] Re: Genart last call review of draft-ietf-… Mankamana Mishra (mankamis)