[mpls] Barry Leiba's No Objection on draft-ietf-mpls-base-yang-15: (with COMMENT)
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Subject: [mpls] Barry Leiba's No Objection on draft-ietf-mpls-base-yang-15: (with COMMENT)
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Barry Leiba has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-mpls-base-yang-15: No Objection When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-mpls-base-yang/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- The document sometimes says “YANG model” and sometimes “YANG module”. It should use the correct term and be consistent, no? I note that there is BCP 14 boilerplate here but no BCP 14 key words in the document. The shepherd writeup notes that also and says that the shepherd wanted to discuss this with the authors... but there is no resolution to that. Did the shepherd discuss it with the authors? Should some “must”s become “MUST”s? Or should the boilerplate and references be removed? — Section 1 — The MPLS base model also defines a new instance of the generic RIB model as defined in {!RFC8349}} to store native MPLS routes. What is the notation around RFC8349? Does it mean something, or is it a markup artifact that needs to be fixed during editing?
- [mpls] Barry Leiba's No Objection on draft-ietf-m… Barry Leiba via Datatracker
- Re: [mpls] Barry Leiba's No Objection on draft-ie… tom petch
- Re: [mpls] Barry Leiba's No Objection on draft-ie… Tarek Saad
- Re: [mpls] Barry Leiba's No Objection on draft-ie… Barry Leiba