Re: [mpls] RtgDir review: draft-ietf-mpls-tp-rosetta-stone-12.txt

John E Drake <jdrake@juniper.net> Mon, 14 October 2013 16:13 UTC

Return-Path: <jdrake@juniper.net>
X-Original-To: mpls@ietfa.amsl.com
Delivered-To: mpls@ietfa.amsl.com
Received: from localhost (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id AE61A11E8184; Mon, 14 Oct 2013 09:13:49 -0700 (PDT)
X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com
X-Spam-Flag: NO
X-Spam-Score: -1.338
X-Spam-Level:
X-Spam-Status: No, score=-1.338 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[AWL=-1.871, BAYES_00=-2.599, UNRESOLVED_TEMPLATE=3.132]
Received: from mail.ietf.org ([12.22.58.30]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id 9v-QN-FlWINj; Mon, 14 Oct 2013 09:13:44 -0700 (PDT)
Received: from db8outboundpool.messaging.microsoft.com (mail-db8lp0187.outbound.messaging.microsoft.com [213.199.154.187]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id B6A8411E8160; Mon, 14 Oct 2013 09:13:42 -0700 (PDT)
Received: from mail169-db8-R.bigfish.com (10.174.8.238) by DB8EHSOBE031.bigfish.com (10.174.4.94) with Microsoft SMTP Server id 14.1.225.22; Mon, 14 Oct 2013 16:13:41 +0000
Received: from mail169-db8 (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by mail169-db8-R.bigfish.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 58D87D200EF; Mon, 14 Oct 2013 16:13:41 +0000 (UTC)
X-Forefront-Antispam-Report: CIP:157.56.240.101; KIP:(null); UIP:(null); IPV:NLI; H:BL2PRD0510HT002.namprd05.prod.outlook.com; RD:none; EFVD:NLI
X-SpamScore: -21
X-BigFish: VPS-21(zz9371I542I1432Izz1f42h208ch1ee6h1de0h1fdah2073h1202h1e76h1d1ah1d2ah1fc6hzz1de098h1033IL1de097h186068h8275dhz2fh2a8h839h944hd24hf0ah1220h1288h12a5h12a9h12bdh137ah13b6h1441h1504h1537h153bh162dh1631h1758h18e1h1946h19b5h19ceh1ad9h1b0ah1d07h1d0ch1d2eh1d3fh1de9h1dfeh1dffh1e1dh1fe8h1ff5h9a9j1155h)
Received-SPF: pass (mail169-db8: domain of juniper.net designates 157.56.240.101 as permitted sender) client-ip=157.56.240.101; envelope-from=jdrake@juniper.net; helo=BL2PRD0510HT002.namprd05.prod.outlook.com ; .outlook.com ;
X-Forefront-Antispam-Report-Untrusted: SFV:NSPM; SFS:(51704005)(377454003)(189002)(199002)(13464003)(54316002)(56776001)(85306002)(81686001)(76482001)(65816001)(66066001)(80022001)(74366001)(79102001)(77982001)(63696002)(59766001)(15975445006)(81816001)(74876001)(74706001)(83072001)(69226001)(47736001)(49866001)(50986001)(47976001)(53806001)(51856001)(46102001)(4396001)(83322001)(74502001)(19580405001)(74662001)(54356001)(80976001)(19580395003)(47446002)(31966008)(81542001)(74316001)(76796001)(76786001)(76576001)(81342001)(77096001)(33646001)(56816003)(24736002); DIR:OUT; SFP:; SCL:1; SRVR:BY2PR05MB142; H:BY2PR05MB142.namprd05.prod.outlook.com; CLIP:66.129.232.2; FPR:; RD:InfoNoRecords; MX:1; A:1; LANG:en;
Received: from mail169-db8 (localhost.localdomain [127.0.0.1]) by mail169-db8 (MessageSwitch) id 1381767219359060_26493; Mon, 14 Oct 2013 16:13:39 +0000 (UTC)
Received: from DB8EHSMHS008.bigfish.com (unknown [10.174.8.230]) by mail169-db8.bigfish.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 5070B9001B5; Mon, 14 Oct 2013 16:13:39 +0000 (UTC)
Received: from BL2PRD0510HT002.namprd05.prod.outlook.com (157.56.240.101) by DB8EHSMHS008.bigfish.com (10.174.4.18) with Microsoft SMTP Server (TLS) id 14.16.227.3; Mon, 14 Oct 2013 16:13:38 +0000
Received: from BY2PR05MB142.namprd05.prod.outlook.com (10.242.39.144) by BL2PRD0510HT002.namprd05.prod.outlook.com (10.255.100.37) with Microsoft SMTP Server (TLS) id 14.16.371.2; Mon, 14 Oct 2013 16:13:35 +0000
Received: from BY2PR05MB142.namprd05.prod.outlook.com (10.242.39.144) by BY2PR05MB142.namprd05.prod.outlook.com (10.242.39.144) with Microsoft SMTP Server (TLS) id 15.0.775.9; Mon, 14 Oct 2013 16:13:33 +0000
Received: from BY2PR05MB142.namprd05.prod.outlook.com ([169.254.12.177]) by BY2PR05MB142.namprd05.prod.outlook.com ([169.254.12.188]) with mapi id 15.00.0775.005; Mon, 14 Oct 2013 16:13:33 +0000
From: John E Drake <jdrake@juniper.net>
To: Gregory Mirsky <gregory.mirsky@ericsson.com>, Alexander Vainshtein <Alexander.Vainshtein@ecitele.com>
Thread-Topic: RtgDir review: draft-ietf-mpls-tp-rosetta-stone-12.txt
Thread-Index: AQHOxYUSjv9ovtIJkkW6NPBEAjYZSJny0cn5gAFpNkCAAA4F4IAACoJwgAAEJPCAAAh7oIAABUhw
Date: Mon, 14 Oct 2013 16:13:32 +0000
Message-ID: <a4e2651a04f0449abb174361634576de@BY2PR05MB142.namprd05.prod.outlook.com>
References: <20211F91F544D247976D84C5D778A4C32E4DB390@SG70YWXCHMBA05.zap.alcatel-lucent.com> <F9336571731ADE42A5397FC831CEAA0215156390@ILPTWPVEXMB01.ecitele.com> <5ca0484c5ca745bbabd93bb799afaca8@BY2PR05MB142.namprd05.prod.outlook.com> <F9336571731ADE42A5397FC831CEAA0215156B5A@ILPTWPVEXMB01.ecitele.com> <ec01c13b7ca4409d963a8bd99f58fa45@BY2PR05MB142.namprd05.prod.outlook.com> <F9336571731ADE42A5397FC831CEAA0215156BF1@ILPTWPVEXMB01.ecitele.com> <7347100B5761DC41A166AC17F22DF1121B6F8FD9@eusaamb103.ericsson.se>
In-Reply-To: <7347100B5761DC41A166AC17F22DF1121B6F8FD9@eusaamb103.ericsson.se>
Accept-Language: en-US
Content-Language: en-US
X-MS-Has-Attach:
X-MS-TNEF-Correlator:
x-originating-ip: [66.129.232.2]
x-forefront-prvs: 0999136621
Content-Type: text/plain; charset="us-ascii"
Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable
MIME-Version: 1.0
X-FOPE-CRA-Verdict: 157.56.240.101$ecitele.com%0%1%DuplicateDomain-c684c95e-93ad-459f-9d80-96fa46cd75af.juniper.net%False%False%0$
X-OriginatorOrg: juniper.net
X-FOPE-CONNECTOR: Id%0$Dn%*$RO%0$TLS%0$FQDN%$TlsDn%
X-FOPE-CONNECTOR: Id%0$Dn%ECITELE.COM$RO%1$TLS%0$FQDN%$TlsDn%
Cc: "rtg-dir@ietf.org" <rtg-dir@ietf.org>, "mpls@ietf.org" <mpls@ietf.org>, "Bhatia, Manav (Manav)" <manav.bhatia@alcatel-lucent.com>, "draft-ietf-mpls-tp-rosetta-stone.all@tools.ietf.org" <draft-ietf-mpls-tp-rosetta-stone.all@tools.ietf.org>, "rtg-ads@tools.ietf.org" <rtg-ads@tools.ietf.org>
Subject: Re: [mpls] RtgDir review: draft-ietf-mpls-tp-rosetta-stone-12.txt
X-BeenThere: mpls@ietf.org
X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.12
Precedence: list
List-Id: Multi-Protocol Label Switching WG <mpls.ietf.org>
List-Unsubscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/options/mpls>, <mailto:mpls-request@ietf.org?subject=unsubscribe>
List-Archive: <http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/mpls>
List-Post: <mailto:mpls@ietf.org>
List-Help: <mailto:mpls-request@ietf.org?subject=help>
List-Subscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/mpls>, <mailto:mpls-request@ietf.org?subject=subscribe>
X-List-Received-Date: Mon, 14 Oct 2013 16:13:49 -0000

Greg,

I don't recall mentioning OAM. 

Yours Irrespectively,

John

> -----Original Message-----
> From: Gregory Mirsky [mailto:gregory.mirsky@ericsson.com]
> Sent: Monday, October 14, 2013 9:01 AM
> To: Alexander Vainshtein; John E Drake
> Cc: rtg-dir@ietf.org; rtg-ads@tools.ietf.org; Bhatia, Manav (Manav); draft-
> ietf-mpls-tp-rosetta-stone.all@tools.ietf.org; mpls@ietf.org
> Subject: RE: RtgDir review: draft-ietf-mpls-tp-rosetta-stone-12.txt
> 
> Hi Sasha, John, et. al,
> isn't there bit of contradiction when first stating that co-routed bidirectional
> and associated bidirectional LSPs are indistinguishable in data plane to note
> that there are difference in their OAM? OAM, in large part, is in data plane and
> how co-routed and associated bidirectional LSP being references in OAM is
> different in the data plane, not only in control and/or management planes.
> 
> 	Regards,
> 		Greg
> 
> -----Original Message-----
> From: mpls-bounces@ietf.org [mailto:mpls-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of
> Alexander Vainshtein
> Sent: Monday, October 14, 2013 8:27 AM
> To: John E Drake
> Cc: rtg-dir@ietf.org; rtg-ads@tools.ietf.org; Bhatia, Manav (Manav); draft-
> ietf-mpls-tp-rosetta-stone.all@tools.ietf.org; mpls@ietf.org
> Subject: Re: [mpls] RtgDir review: draft-ietf-mpls-tp-rosetta-stone-12.txt
> 
> John,
> Lots of thanks for a prompt response.
> 
> I fully agree with you that there is no difference in the data plane between two
> directions a co-routed bi-directional LSP and two directions of an associated bi-
> directional LSP. The difference is mainly in management/control plane, in the
> OAM etc.
> 
> This is exactly why I find the term "fate-sharing" inappropriate when it is
> applied to forward and backward directions of a co-routed bi-directional LSP
> because to me fate-staring refers to first of all to the data plane behavior.
> 
> Regards,
>      Sasha
> 
> 
> > -----Original Message-----
> > From: John E Drake [mailto:jdrake@juniper.net]
> > Sent: Monday, October 14, 2013 6:10 PM
> > To: Alexander Vainshtein
> > Cc: rtg-dir@ietf.org; Bhatia, Manav (Manav); mpls@ietf.org;
> > draft-ietf-mpls-tp- rosetta-stone.all@tools.ietf.org;
> > rtg-ads@tools.ietf.org
> > Subject: RE: RtgDir review: draft-ietf-mpls-tp-rosetta-stone-12.txt
> >
> > Sasha,
> >
> > My point was simply that in the data plane there isn't any difference
> > between the two.
> >
> > Yours Irrespectively,
> >
> > John
> >
> > > -----Original Message-----
> > > From: rtg-dir-bounces@ietf.org [mailto:rtg-dir-bounces@ietf.org] On
> > > Behalf
> > Of
> > > Alexander Vainshtein
> > > Sent: Monday, October 14, 2013 7:34 AM
> > > To: John E Drake
> > > Cc: rtg-dir@ietf.org; Bhatia, Manav (Manav); mpls@ietf.org;
> > > draft-ietf-mpls- tp-rosetta-stone.all@tools.ietf.org;
> > > rtg-ads@tools.ietf.org
> > > Subject: Re: [RTG-DIR] RtgDir review:
> > > draft-ietf-mpls-tp-rosetta-stone-12.txt
> > >
> > > John,
> > > Not sure I fully understood your message.
> > >
> > > My comments have been about applicability of the term "fate-sharing"
> > > to the two directions of a co-routed bi-directional LSP.
> > > It is of course true that each direction of an associated
> > > bi-directional LSP can fail independently of the other one, but,
> > > presumably, nobody has expected anything else in this case.
> > >
> > > Regards,
> > >      Sasha
> > >
> > >
> > > > -----Original Message-----
> > > > From: John E Drake [mailto:jdrake@juniper.net]
> > > > Sent: Monday, October 14, 2013 4:42 PM
> > > > To: Alexander Vainshtein; Bhatia, Manav (Manav)
> > > > Cc: rtg-dir@ietf.org; rtg-ads@tools.ietf.org;
> > > > draft-ietf-mpls-tp-rosetta- stone.all@tools.ietf.org;
> > > > mpls@ietf.org
> > > > Subject: RE: RtgDir review:
> > > > draft-ietf-mpls-tp-rosetta-stone-12.txt
> > > >
> > > > Sasha,
> > > >
> > > > I think your comments apply equally to bidirectional LSPs.
> > > >
> > > > Yours Irrespectively,
> > > >
> > > > John
> > > >
> > > > > -----Original Message-----
> > > > > From: rtg-dir-bounces@ietf.org [mailto:rtg-dir-bounces@ietf.org]
> > > > > On Behalf
> > > > Of
> > > > > Alexander Vainshtein
> > > > > Sent: Sunday, October 13, 2013 9:16 AM
> > > > > To: Bhatia, Manav (Manav)
> > > > > Cc: rtg-dir@ietf.org; rtg-ads@tools.ietf.org;
> > > > > draft-ietf-mpls-tp-rosetta- stone.all@tools.ietf.org;
> > > > > mpls@ietf.org
> > > > > Subject: Re: [RTG-DIR] RtgDir review:
> > > > > draft-ietf-mpls-tp-rosetta-stone-12.txt
> > > > >
> > > > > Manav and all,
> > > > > Regarding one of the nits you've identified:
> > > > > "it would be useful to mention that an important property of
> > > > > co-routed bidirectional path is that the forward and backward
> > > > > directions
> > > share fate."
> > > > >
> > > > > IMHO and FWIW this is not correct. To the best of my
> > > > > understanding the two directions of an MPLS-TP co-routed
> > > > > bi-directional path share lifespan (i.e.,they are set up and
> > > > > torn down in a single management or
> > > control plane operation).
> > > > > But they do not share fate, as can be seen from the following examples:
> > > > >
> > > > > 1. A unidirectiona fiber cut in one of the links used by a
> > > > > co-routed
> > > > > bi-
> > > > directional
> > > > > trail will result in traffic failur in the affected direction
> > > > > but not necessarily in
> > > > the
> > > > > reverse one
> > > > >
> > > > > 2. Consider the case when one of entries the ILM in one of the
> > > > > transit LSRs is corruped. This will result in incorrect failure
> > > > > of a single label, but the rest of
> > > > the
> > > > > labels would be handled correctly. Since co-routed
> > > > > bi-directional trails do not require using the same label in
> > > > > both directions of a trail, the fate sharing
> > > > would
> > > > > be broken.
> > > > > (Actually, in such a way it could be easily broken even if the
> > > > > same label is
> > > > used
> > > > > on each segment of the LSP in both directions...)
> > > > >
> > > > > My 2c,
> > > > >      Sasha
> > > > >
> > > > >
> > > > >
> > > > > ________________________________________
> > > > > From: rtg-dir-bounces@ietf.org [rtg-dir-bounces@ietf.org] on
> > > > > behalf of Bhatia, Manav (Manav)
> > > > > [manav.bhatia@alcatel-lucent.com]
> > > > > Sent: Sunday, October 13, 2013 5:55 PM
> > > > > To: rtg-ads@tools.ietf.org
> > > > > Cc: rtg-dir@ietf.org;
> > > > > draft-ietf-mpls-tp-rosetta-stone.all@tools.ietf.org;
> > > > > mpls@ietf.org
> > > > > Subject: [RTG-DIR] RtgDir review:
> > > > > draft-ietf-mpls-tp-rosetta-stone-12.txt
> > > > >
> > > > > Hello,
> > > > >
> > > > > I have been selected as the Routing Directorate reviewer for
> > > > > this draft. The Routing Directorate seeks to review all routing
> > > > > or routing-related drafts as they pass through IETF last call
> > > > > and IESG review, and sometimes on special request. The purpose
> > > > > of the review is to provide assistance to the Routing ADs. For
> > > > > more information about the Routing Directorate, please
> > > > > seehttp://www.ietf.org/iesg/directorate/routing.html
> > > > >
> > > > > Although these comments are primarily for the use of the Routing
> > > > > ADs, it would be helpful if you could consider them along with
> > > > > any other IETF Last
> > > > Call
> > > > > comments that you receive, and strive to resolve them through
> > > > > discussion or by updating the draft.
> > > > >
> > > > > Document: draft-ietf-mpls-tp-rosetta-stone-12.txt
> > > > > Reviewer: Manav Bhatia
> > > > > Review Date: October 13th, 2013
> > > > > IETF LC End Date: October 16, 2013 Intended Status:
> > > > > Informational
> > > > >
> > > > > Summary:  This document is basically ready for publication, but
> > > > > has nits that should be considered prior to publication.
> > > > >
> > > > > Comments: This document is built on top of terms already defined
> > > > > in different RFCs and ITU-T documents. The terms and definitions
> > > > > have already been reviewed so there is a trifle little that
> > > > > needs to be done there. Overall, the document looks good and
> > > > > ready for publication. Some of my comments can be
> > > > >
> > > > > Nits:
> > > > >
> > > > > o) Please expand PW in either the Abstract or Sec 3.5
> > > > >
> > > > > o) When explaining Control Plane (3.6) should we mention that it
> > > > > is possible
> > > > to
> > > > > operate an MPLS-TP network without using a Control Plane?
> > > > >
> > > > > o) In 3.7, it would be useful to mention that an important
> > > > > property of co-
> > > > routed
> > > > > bidirectional path is that the forward and backward directions share
> fate.
> > > > > Similarly, in 3.1, we should mention that the forward and
> > > > > backward directions don't share fate.
> > > > >
> > > > > o) 3.12 in the current text doesn't look very helpful. Can it be
> > > > > rephrased it to something like, "The equipment management
> > > > > function
> > > > > (EMF) provides the means through which an element management
> > > > > system
> > > > > (EMS) and other managing entities manage the network element
> > > > > function
> > > (NEF)."
> > > > >
> > > > > o) 3.13 talks about Fault cause without explaining what a fault
> > > > > cause is. It
> > > > took
> > > > > me some time to understand what was meant by "fault cause". Can
> > > > > the authors of the draft rephrase 3.13 in their own language to
> > > > > explain what they mean by a Failure. The current definition in
> > > > > the draft has been picked up as-is from ITU-T G.806
> > > > >
> > > > > o) 3.14 talks about "inability of a function to perform a
> > > > > required action". Since this RFC-to-be is in the IETF domain,
> > > > > can this be rephrased to use a term like router/switch instead
> > > > > of a more esoteric "function". This is a general
> > > > comment
> > > > > and applies to most of the definitions that have been copied
> > > > > from the ITU-T documents.
> > > > >
> > > > > o) The last paragraph of 3.17 says the following:
> > > > >
> > > > > "OAM packets are subject to the same forwarding treatment as the
> > > > > data traffic, but they are distinct from the data traffic."
> > > > >
> > > > > In what sense are the OAM packets distinct from the data traffic?
> > > > >
> > > > > o) Please include "T-PE" and "S-PE" in Sec 1.2. These have not
> > > > > been expanded in the document.
> > > > >
> > > > > o) Sec 3.19 uses TCM without expanding it first.
> > > > >
> > > > > o) In Sec 3.23, s/Tandem Connections/Tandem Connection
> > > > >
> > > > > o) In 3.28.3, can the following text be added:
> > > > >
> > > > > An LSP segment comprises one or more continuous hops on the path
> > > > > of the LSP.  [RFC5654] defines two terms.  A "segment" is a
> > > > > single hop along the
> > > > path
> > > > > of an LSP, while a "concatenated segment" is more than one hop
> > > > > along the path of an LSP.
> > > > >
> > > > > o) In 3.31, Isn't Operations Support Systems (OSS) a more common
> > > > > term than Operations Systems (OS)?
> > > > >
> > > > > Cheers, Manav
> > > > >
> > > > > This e-mail message is intended for the recipient only and
> > > > > contains
> > > > information
> > > > > which is CONFIDENTIAL and which may be proprietary to ECI Telecom.
> > > > > If you have received this transmission in error, please inform
> > > > > us by e-mail, phone or fax, and then delete the original and all copies
> thereof.
> > > > >
> > > > >
> > > >
> > >
> > >
> > >
> > > This e-mail message is intended for the recipient only and contains
> > information
> > > which is CONFIDENTIAL and which may be proprietary to ECI Telecom.
> > > If you have received this transmission in error, please inform us by
> > > e-mail, phone or fax, and then delete the original and all copies thereof.
> > >
> > >
> >
> 
> 
> 
> This e-mail message is intended for the recipient only and contains information
> which is CONFIDENTIAL and which may be proprietary to ECI Telecom. If you
> have received this transmission in error, please inform us by e-mail, phone or
> fax, and then delete the original and all copies thereof.
> 
> _______________________________________________
> mpls mailing list
> mpls@ietf.org
> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/mpls
>