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[mpls] AD review for https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-mpls-egress-tlv-for-nil-fec/

James Guichard <james.n.guichard@futurewei.com> Mon, 01 April 2024 18:52 UTC

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From: James Guichard <james.n.guichard@futurewei.com>
To: "draft-ietf-mpls-egress-tlv-for-nil-fec@ietf.org" <draft-ietf-mpls-egress-tlv-for-nil-fec@ietf.org>, "mpls-chairs@ietf.org" <mpls-chairs@ietf.org>, "mpls@ietf.org" <mpls@ietf.org>
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Dear Authors:

Thank you for this document. I have completed my review and have the following comment:


Section 4.1.1: The reference [I.D-ietf-idr-segment-routing-te-policy] is an expired draft that is replaced by https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-idr-sr-policy-safi/ and https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-sr-segtypes-ext/. Please correct the reference to point to these active drafts. Please also correct the reference to the same expired draft in section 4.1.2.

Please review and update the document where necessary and post a new version.

Thanks!

Jim

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