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Re: [mpls] WGLC for draft-ietf-mpls-ldp-yang

tom petch <ietfc@btconnect.com> Sat, 28 July 2018 10:31 UTC

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From: tom petch <ietfc@btconnect.com>
To: "N.Leymann@telekom.de" <N.Leymann@telekom.de>, "mpls@ietf.org" <mpls@ietf.org>
CC: "mpls-chairs@ietf.org" <mpls-chairs@ietf.org>, "draft-ietf-mpls-ldp-yang@ietf.org" <draft-ietf-mpls-ldp-yang@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [mpls] WGLC for draft-ietf-mpls-ldp-yang
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The YANG module is deficient in a number of respects, which I have come
to think of as boiler plate issues, since they are deficient in almost
all the I-Ds from the Routing Area:-)

- RFC2119 boiler plate lacks reference to RFC8174 and you have lower
case 'should'

- NMDA is mentioned in the Introduction but it is usually called out in
the Abstract as well

- no Note to RFC Editor asking them to replace XXXX with the number
assigned to this RFC

- no Note to RFC Editor asking them to replace the four dates in the
YANG modules with the date of publication

- no YANG Version statement in the YANG modules

- no mention of the current YANG 1.1 RFC

- no reference statements for the import modules in the YANG modules and
their RFC are missing from the Normative References of the I-D

- no Informative Reference to the Tree Diagrams RFC8340

- Security Considerations do not conform to rfc6087bis and lack the
Normative References that that calls for

- you MUST have IANA Considerations else you do not have a YANG module

- the reference for
   [I-D.ietf-netmod-revised-datastores]
is out of date

- RFC6536 has been superseded

- the reference for
[I-D.ietf-mpls-mldp-yang]
is out of date

Incidentally, the authors of
draft-ietf-mpls-mldp-yang-04
might learn something from this list.

Tom Petch

----- Original Message -----
From: <N.Leymann@telekom.de>
To: <mpls@ietf.org>
Cc: <mpls-chairs@ietf.org>; <draft-ietf-mpls-ldp-yang@ietf.org>
Sent: Wednesday, July 25, 2018 4:11 PM

> Dear Working Group,
>
> This mail initiates the two week working group last call on
draft-ietf-mpls-ldp-yang- which is considered
> mature and ready for a final working group review.
>
> Please read this document if you haven't read the most recent version
yet, and send your comments to
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> This working group last call ends August 10th, 2018.
>
> Best regards
>
>    Nic
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