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Re: [mpls] [Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-mpls-spring-entropy-label-11.txt

Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in> Tue, 03 July 2018 17:12 UTC

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Subject: Re: [mpls] [Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-mpls-spring-entropy-label-11.txt
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Francis, thanks for your review. I have entered a No Objection ballot.

Alissa

> On Jun 19, 2018, at 11:02 AM, Francis Dupont <Francis.Dupont@fdupont.fr> wrote:
> 
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
> by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just
> like any other last call comments.
> 
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> Document: draft-ietf-mpls-spring-entropy-label-11.txt
> Reviewer: Francis Dupont
> Review Date: 20180616
> IETF LC End Date: 20180619
> IESG Telechat date: unknown
> 
> Summary: Ready with Nits
> 
> Major issues: None
> 
> Minor issues: None
> 
> Nits/editorial comments: 
> - 6 authors (formal limit is 5)
> 
> - ToC page 2 and 11 page 21: Acknowledgements -> Acknowledgements
> 
> - 1 page 3: please introduce LSP and SR abbrevs (MPLS is well known
>  so does not need to be introduced). Remember that Abstract and body
>  are independent so not well known abbrevs should be intrduced at
>  first use in both.
> 
> - 1 page 3: perfom -> perform
> 
> - 2 page 4: IMHO you should add LAG in the list (it makes 7.2.2.1 easier
>  to follow).
> 
> - 6 page 10: accomodate -> accommodate 
> 
> - 12 page 21: pelase check if Hendrickx is not Henderickx
> 
> Regards
> 
> Francis.Dupont@fdupont.fr
> 
> PS: these points are very minor so don't fix them if you don't have
> another reason to update the I-D.
> 
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