Re: [mpls] I-D Action: draft-ietf-mpls-static-yang-12.txt
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From: tom petch <ietfc@btconnect.com>
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Subject: Re: [mpls] I-D Action: draft-ietf-mpls-static-yang-12.txt
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I wonder if it is worth breaking this into two YANG modules with very little in the second, extended. It could instead be handled by one module with a feature or two. Given that the IETF has abolished the page number, it would be easier to reference with more sections. I suggest a new section before the start of the YANG and a new section before the text that prefaces the YANG. The Security Considerations has a malformed reference to TLS, similar to that on another draft! Tom Petch ________________________________________ From: mpls <mpls-bounces@ietf.org> on behalf of internet-drafts@ietf.org <internet-drafts@ietf.org> Sent: 02 November 2020 03:56 To: i-d-announce@ietf.org Cc: mpls@ietf.org Subject: [mpls] I-D Action: draft-ietf-mpls-static-yang-12.txt A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories. This draft is a work item of the Multiprotocol Label Switching WG of the IETF. Title : A YANG Data Model for MPLS Static LSPs Authors : Tarek Saad Rakesh Gandhi Xufeng Liu Vishnu Pavan Beeram Igor Bryskin Filename : draft-ietf-mpls-static-yang-12.txt Pages : 18 Date : 2020-11-01 Abstract: This document contains the specification for the MPLS Static Label Switched Paths (LSPs) YANG model. The model allows for the provisioning of static LSP(s) on Label Edge Router(s) LER(s) and Label Switched Router(s) LSR(s) devices along a LSP path without the dependency on any signaling protocol. The MPLS Static LSP model augments the MPLS base YANG model with specific data to configure and manage MPLS Static LSP(s). The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-mpls-static-yang/ There are also htmlized versions available at: https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-mpls-static-yang-12 https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-mpls-static-yang-12 A diff from the previous version is available at: https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-mpls-static-yang-12 Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of submission until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org. Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at: ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/ _______________________________________________ mpls mailing list mpls@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/mpls
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