[mpls] Mirja Kühlewind's No Objection on draft-ietf-mpls-app-aware-tldp-08: (with COMMENT)
Mirja Kühlewind <ietf@kuehlewind.net> Sun, 18 June 2017 09:13 UTC
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Subject: [mpls] Mirja Kühlewind's No Objection on draft-ietf-mpls-app-aware-tldp-08: (with COMMENT)
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Mirja Kühlewind has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-mpls-app-aware-tldp-08: No Objection When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-mpls-app-aware-tldp/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- nits regarding use of normative language: 1) sec 2.2.: „Therefore, if the intersection of the sets of received and sent TA-Id is null, then LSR MUST send 'Session Rejected/Targeted Application Capability Mis- Match' Notification message to the initiating LSR and close the session.“ Probably no need to make this normative MUST again in the example text -> s/MUST send/sends/ 2) Similar the use of normative language in the use case section (5) does not seem to be appropriate, or at least not consistent. Maybe just convert all upper cases MAYs to lower case in that section.
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