[mpls] AD review for draft-ietf-mldp-multi-topology
James Guichard <james.n.guichard@futurewei.com> Tue, 16 April 2024 11:37 UTC
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From: James Guichard <james.n.guichard@futurewei.com>
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Subject: [mpls] AD review for draft-ietf-mldp-multi-topology
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Hi Authors, Thank you for an easy to read and understand document. I have completed my AD review and only have a minor nit which is to use the boilerplate from RFC 8174 in Section 3 of the document. Please make this correction and publish a new version, and I will move the document to IETF last-call. Thanks! Jim
- [mpls] AD review for draft-ietf-mldp-multi-topolo… James Guichard
- Re: [mpls] AD review for draft-ietf-mldp-multi-to… Mankamana Mishra (mankamis)