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Re: [mpls] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC8029 (7892)

Carlos Pignataro <cpignata@gmail.com> Tue, 16 April 2024 02:47 UTC

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Subject: Re: [mpls] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC8029 (7892)
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I agree — and I’d prefer the 2nd option of corrected text. 

(Or allowing both *switched / *switching as valid expansions, like for LSP, though I imagine that could be more controversial)

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> On Apr 15, 2024, at 10:58, Tony Li <tony.li@tony.li> wrote:
> 
> 
> Hi,
> 
> This report is accurate.  I recommend marking it verified, held for document update.
> 
> Thanks,
> Tony
> MPLS co-chair
> 
> 
>> On Apr 15, 2024, at 7:10 AM, RFC Errata System <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org> wrote:
>> 
>> The following errata report has been submitted for RFC8029,
>> "Detecting Multiprotocol Label Switched (MPLS) Data-Plane Failures".
>> 
>> --------------------------------------
>> You may review the report below and at:
>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid7892
>> 
>> --------------------------------------
>> Type: Editorial
>> Reported by: Loa Andersson <loa@pi.nu>
>> 
>> Section: GLOBAL
>> 
>> Original Text
>> -------------
>> 
>> Detecting Multiprotocol Label Switched (MPLS) Data-Plane Failures
>> 
>> 
>> Corrected Text
>> --------------
>> Detecting Multiprotocol Label Switched Data-Plane Failures
>> or
>> Detecting Multiprotocol Label Switching (MPLS) Data-Plane Failures.
>> 
>> Notes
>> -----
>> MPLS expands to  "Multiprotocol Label Switching", not to "Multiprotocol Label Switched".
>> 
>> Either we can remove the abbreviation in the title or s/Switched/Switching, either of the
>> alternatives work.
>> 
>> Instructions:
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>> 
>> --------------------------------------
>> RFC8029 (draft-ietf-mpls-rfc4379bis-09)
>> --------------------------------------
>> Title               : Detecting Multiprotocol Label Switched (MPLS) Data-Plane Failures
>> Publication Date    : March 2017
>> Author(s)           : K. Kompella, G. Swallow, C. Pignataro, Ed., N. Kumar, S. Aldrin, M. Chen
>> Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
>> Source              : Multiprotocol Label Switching
>> Stream              : IETF
>> Verifying Party     : IESG
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