Re: [MSEC] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC6407 (3861)

William Atwood <william.atwood@concordia.ca> Mon, 13 January 2014 04:35 UTC

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Subject: Re: [MSEC] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC6407 (3861)
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Works for me.

  Bill

On 12/01/2014 5:36 PM, Sean Turner wrote:
> I guess I’d rather just mark this one hold for document update because I don’t think implementers are going to make any implementation mistakes based on the errata or the suggestion below.  Are we okay with that?
> 
> spt
> 
> On Jan 07, 2014, at 10:24, William Atwood <william.atwood@concordia.ca>; wrote:
> 
>> It took me using "diff" to find what is reported as an error.
>>
>> s/ISAMKP/ISAKMP/ in line 5.
>>
>> Yes, this is an error.
>>
>> However, my suggestion is to re-word the paragraph as follows:
>>
>> Secure group and multicast applications require a method by which each
>> group member shares common security policy and keying material.
>> This document describes a group key management system called the Group
>> Domain of Interpretation (GDOI), which is an Internet Security
>> Association and Key Management Protocol (ISAKMP) [RFC2408] Domain of
>> Interpretation (DOI).
>>
>>  Bill
>>
>> On 07/01/2014 5:02 AM, RFC Errata System wrote:
>>> The following errata report has been submitted for RFC6407,
>>> "The Group Domain of Interpretation".
>>>
>>> --------------------------------------
>>> You may review the report below and at:
>>> http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata_search.php?rfc=6407&eid=3861
>>>
>>> --------------------------------------
>>> Type: Editorial
>>> Reported by: Prashant Gupta <prashantog@gmail.com>;
>>>
>>> Section: Introduction
>>>
>>> Original Text
>>> -------------
>>> Secure group and multicast applications require a method by which
>>>   each group member shares common security policy and keying material.
>>>   This document describes the Group Domain of Interpretation (GDOI),
>>>   which is an Internet Security Association and Key Management Protocol
>>>   (ISAMKP) [RFC2408] Domain of Interpretation (DOI), a group key
>>>   management system. 
>>>
>>> Corrected Text
>>> --------------
>>> Secure group and multicast applications require a method by which
>>>   each group member shares common security policy and keying material.
>>>   This document describes the Group Domain of Interpretation (GDOI),
>>>   which is an Internet Security Association and Key Management Protocol
>>>   (ISAKMP) [RFC2408] Domain of Interpretation (DOI), a group key
>>>   management system. 
>>>
>>> Notes
>>> -----
>>>
>>>
>>> Instructions:
>>> -------------
>>> This errata is currently posted as "Reported". If necessary, please
>>> use "Reply All" to discuss whether it should be verified or
>>> rejected. When a decision is reached, the verifying party (IESG)
>>> can log in to change the status and edit the report, if necessary. 
>>>
>>> --------------------------------------
>>> RFC6407 (draft-ietf-msec-gdoi-update-11)
>>> --------------------------------------
>>> Title               : The Group Domain of Interpretation
>>> Publication Date    : October 2011
>>> Author(s)           : B. Weis, S. Rowles, T. Hardjono
>>> Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
>>> Source              : Multicast Security
>>> Area                : Security
>>> Stream              : IETF
>>> Verifying Party     : IESG
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>>
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> 

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   and Software Engineering
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1455 de Maisonneuve Blvd. West    http://users.encs.concordia.ca/~bill
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