[MSEC] draft-ietf-msec-ipsec-group-counter-modes-05 -- nits (fwd)
Alfred Hönes <ah@TR-Sys.de> Mon, 15 March 2010 16:44 UTC
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Subject: [MSEC] draft-ietf-msec-ipsec-group-counter-modes-05 -- nits (fwd)
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Hello again,
I've followed up to your revised Group CTR Modes draft,
draft-ietf-msec-ipsec-group-counter-modes-05.
The generalization has been smooth and everything looks quite well
now; I only saw two minor editorial glitches left:
a) In Section 1, s/Camilla/Camellia/
(someone affiliated with poor Prince Charles ? :-) )
b) In the last paragraph of Section 2,
... known as a Many-to-Many Applications ...
should say:
... known as Many-to-Many Applications ...
Kind regards,
Alfred.
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