Review of draft-ietf-dnsext-dnssec-experiments-02
Geoffrey Sisson <geoff@nominet.org.uk> Wed, 15 March 2006 18:03 UTC
From: Geoffrey Sisson <geoff@nominet.org.uk>
Subject: Review of draft-ietf-dnsext-dnssec-experiments-02
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I have reviewed draft-ietf-dnsext-dnssec-experiments-02 and believe it is ready to be forwarded to the IESG for consideration for publication as a standards-track RFC. Nits: - Should RFC 2119 be a normative reference rather than informative? - "DNSSEC-aware" is presumably the same thing as "security-aware" in RFC 4033, but it may be a good idea to state this explicitly. - In Section 4, second-to-last paragraph, "experiments" should be "experiment's" (with apostrophe). - In Section 5, paragraph 2, "may" should probably be "MAY". Suggestions: - In Section 6.1, change "the not validatable response" to "a non-validatable response"? - In Section 6.2, change "not aware" to "unaware"? Geoff -- to unsubscribe send a message to namedroppers-request@ops.ietf.org with the word 'unsubscribe' in a single line as the message text body. archive: <http://ops.ietf.org/lists/namedroppers/>
- Reminder: WGLC dnssec-experiments and dnssec-opt-… Olaf M. Kolkman
- Re: Reminder: WGLC dnssec-experiments and dnssec-… Roy Arends
- RE: Reminder: WGLC dnssec-experiments and dnssec-… Scott Rose
- Re: Reminder: WGLC dnssec-experiments and dnssec-… Thierry Moreau
- Re: Reminder: WGLC dnssec-experiments and dnssec-… Thomas Narten
- Re: Reminder: WGLC dnssec-experiments and dnssec-… Mark Kosters
- Re: Reminder: WGLC dnssec-experiments and dnssec-… Sam Weiler
- Re: Reminder: WGLC dnssec-experiments and dnssec-… Thomas Narten
- Re: Reminder: WGLC dnssec-experiments and dnssec-… David Blacka
- RE: Reminder: WGLC dnssec-experiments and dnssec-… Scott Rose
- Re: Reminder: WGLC dnssec-experiments and dnssec-… Rodney Joffe
- Re: WGLC dnssec-experiments and dnssec-opt-in Matt Larson
- Re: Reminder: WGLC dnssec-experiments and dnssec-… David Blacka
- Re: Reminder: WGLC dnssec-experiments and dnssec-… David Blacka
- Review of draft-ietf-dnsext-dnssec-experiments-02 Geoffrey Sisson
- Review of draft-ietf-dnsext-dnssec-opt-in-08 Geoffrey Sisson
- Re: Reminder: WGLC dnssec-experiments and dnssec-… Sam Weiler
- Re: WGLC dnssec-experiments and dnssec-opt-in Sam Weiler
- Re: WGLC dnssec-experiments and dnssec-opt-in Sam Weiler
- Re: WGLC dnssec-experiments and dnssec-opt-in David Blacka
- Re: WGLC dnssec-experiments and dnssec-opt-in Sam Weiler
- Re: WGLC dnssec-experiments and dnssec-opt-in Sam Weiler
- Re: WGLC dnssec-experiments and dnssec-opt-in David Blacka
- Re: WGLC dnssec-experiments and dnssec-opt-in Olaf M. Kolkman
- Re: WGLC dnssec-experiments and dnssec-opt-in David Blacka
- Re: WGLC dnssec-experiments and dnssec-opt-in Sam Weiler
- Re: WGLC dnssec-experiments and dnssec-opt-in David Blacka
- Re: WGLC dnssec-experiments and dnssec-opt-in Olaf M. Kolkman