[MEXT] [mext] #6: Minor editorial corrections and updates
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Ticket #6: Minor editorial corrections and updates Submitted by Jari Arkko <jari.arkko@piuha.net>: Since the publication of RFC 3775, several of the references have progressed, have been republished, etc. ---- Section 9.3.2 (keyword capitalization): OLD: However, the sending node MUST not do this in the following cases: NEW: However, the sending node MUST NOT do this in the following cases: ---- Section 10.4.2 (missing paranthesis): OLD: Multicast packets addressed to a multicast address with a scope larger than link-local, but smaller than global (e.g., site- local and organization-local [3], to which the mobile node is subscribed, SHOULD NOT be tunneled to the mobile node. NEW: Multicast packets addressed to a multicast address with a scope larger than link-local, but smaller than global (e.g., site- local and organization-local [3]), to which the mobile node is subscribed, SHOULD NOT be tunneled to the mobile node. ---- Section 10.6.4 (keyword capitalization): OLD: As described in Section 10.3.1, the lifetime returned by the home agent in a Binding Acknowledgement MUST not be greater than the remaining valid lifetime for the subnet prefix in the mobile node's home address. NEW: As described in Section 10.3.1, the lifetime returned by the home agent in a Binding Acknowledgement MUST NOT be greater than the remaining valid lifetime for the subnet prefix in the mobile node's home address. ---- Section 11.7.3 (keyword capitalization): OLD: o The Binding Authorization Data mobility option, if present, MUST be the last option and MUST not have trailing padding. NEW: o The Binding Authorization Data mobility option, if present, MUST be the last option and MUST NOT have trailing padding. ---- Reference updates as follows: RFC 1750 => RFC 4086[[BR]] RFC 3513 => RFC 4291[[BR]] RFC 2424 => RFC 5226[[BR]] RFC 2461 => RFC 4861[[BR]] RFC 2462 => RFC 4862[[BR]] RFC 2463 => RFC 4443[[BR]] RFC 3041 => RFC 4941[[BR]] draft-bellovin-mandate-keymgmt-00 => RFC 4107[[BR]] draft-ietf-ipsec-ikev2-07 => RFC 4306[[BR]] draft-nikander-mobileip-v6-ro-sec-00 => RFC 4225[[BR]] ----------------------------------------+----------------------------------- Reporter: charliep@computer.org | Owner: charliep@computer.org Type: defect | Status: new Priority: minor | Milestone: Component: draft-ietf-mext-rfc3775bis | Version: Severity: Active WG Document | Keywords: ----------------------------------------+----------------------------------- -- Ticket URL: <http://www3.tools.ietf.org/wg/mext/trac/ticket/6> mext <http://tools.ietf.org/wg/mext/> _______________________________________________ MEXT mailing list MEXT@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/mext