Re: [netconf] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC8572 (6807)
Kent Watsen <kent+ietf@watsen.net> Tue, 04 January 2022 17:15 UTC
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Date: Tue, 04 Jan 2022 17:15:03 +0000
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Subject: Re: [netconf] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC8572 (6807)
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This Errata is correct. Kent // as author > On Jan 4, 2022, at 2:43 AM, RFC Errata System <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org> wrote: > > The following errata report has been submitted for RFC8572, > "Secure Zero Touch Provisioning (SZTP)". > > -------------------------------------- > You may review the report below and at: > https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid6807 > > -------------------------------------- > Type: Editorial > Reported by: Lijun Liao <lijun.liao@gmail.com> > > Section: 3.3 > > Original Text > ------------- > When unencrypted, the ownership voucher artifact is as defined in > [RFC8366]. As described, it is a CMS structure whose topmost content > type MUST be the OID id-signedData (1.2.840.113549.1.7.2), whose > eContentType MUST be OID id-ct-animaJSONVoucher > (1.2.840.113549.1.9.16.1), or the OID id-data (1.2.840.113549.1.7.1). > When the OID id-data is used, the encoding (JSON, XML, etc.) SHOULD > be communicated externally. In either case, the associated content > is an octet string containing ietf-voucher data in the expected > encoding. > > When encrypted, the topmost content type of the ownership voucher > artifact's CMS structure MUST be the OID id-envelopedData > (1.2.840.113549.1.7.3), and the encryptedContentInfo's content type > MUST be the OID id-signedData (1.2.840.113549.1.7.2), whose > eContentType MUST be OID id-ct-animaJSONVoucher > (1.2.840.113549.1.9.16.1), or the OID id-data (1.2.840.113549.1.7.1). > When the OID id-data is used, the encoding (JSON, XML, etc.) SHOULD > be communicated externally. In either case, the associated content > is an octet string containing ietf-voucher data in the expected > encoding. > > Corrected Text > -------------- > When unencrypted, the ownership voucher artifact is as defined in > [RFC8366]. As described, it is a CMS structure whose topmost content > type MUST be the OID id-signedData (1.2.840.113549.1.7.2), whose > eContentType MUST be OID id-ct-animaJSONVoucher > (1.2.840.113549.1.9.16.1.40), or the OID id-data (1.2.840.113549.1.7.1). > When the OID id-data is used, the encoding (JSON, XML, etc.) SHOULD > be communicated externally. In either case, the associated content > is an octet string containing ietf-voucher data in the expected > encoding. > > When encrypted, the topmost content type of the ownership voucher > artifact's CMS structure MUST be the OID id-envelopedData > (1.2.840.113549.1.7.3), and the encryptedContentInfo's content type > MUST be the OID id-signedData (1.2.840.113549.1.7.2), whose > eContentType MUST be OID id-ct-animaJSONVoucher > (1.2.840.113549.1.9.16.1.40), or the OID id-data (1.2.840.113549.1.7.1). > When the OID id-data is used, the encoding (JSON, XML, etc.) SHOULD > be communicated externally. In either case, the associated content > is an octet string containing ietf-voucher data in the expected > encoding. > > Notes > ----- > The OID for id-ct-animaJSONVoucher is 1.2.840.113549.1.9.16.1.40. > > Instructions: > ------------- > This erratum is currently posted as "Reported". If necessary, please > use "Reply All" to discuss whether it should be verified or > rejected. When a decision is reached, the verifying party > can log in to change the status and edit the report, if necessary. > > -------------------------------------- > RFC8572 (draft-ietf-netconf-zerotouch-29) > -------------------------------------- > Title : Secure Zero Touch Provisioning (SZTP) > Publication Date : April 2019 > Author(s) : K. Watsen, I. Farrer, M. Abrahamsson > Category : PROPOSED STANDARD > Source : Network Configuration > Area : Operations and Management > Stream : IETF > Verifying Party : IESG
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