[netconf] [Errata Verified] RFC8650 (7400)

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Subject: [netconf] [Errata Verified] RFC8650 (7400)
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The following errata report has been verified for RFC8650,
"Dynamic Subscription to YANG Events and Datastores over RESTCONF". 

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You may review the report below and at:
https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid7400

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Status: Verified
Type: Technical

Reported by: Mohamed Boucadair <mohamed.boucadair@orange.com>
Date Reported: 2023-03-21
Verified by: Rob Wilton (IESG)

Section: Appendix A.3

Original Text
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   POST /restconf/operations
        /ietf-subscribed-notifications:establish-subscription
   {
      "ietf-subscribed-notifications:input": {
         "stream": "NETCONF",
         "stream-xpath-filter":
           "/ietf-vrrp:vrrp-protocol-error-event[
             protocol-error-reason='checksum-error']/",
      }
   }

       Figure 16: Establishing a Subscription Error Reason via XPath

...

   POST /restconf/operations
        /ietf-subscribed-notifications:modify-subscription
   {
      "ietf-subscribed-notifications:input": {
         "stream": "NETCONF",
         "stream-subtree-filter": {
           "/ietf-vrrp:vrrp-protocol-error-event" : {}
         }
      }
   }
                Figure 17: Example "modify-subscription" RPC

Corrected Text
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   POST /restconf/operations
        /ietf-subscribed-notifications:establish-subscription

   {
      "ietf-subscribed-notifications:input": {
         "stream": "NETCONF",
         "stream-xpath-filter":
           "/ietf-vrrp:vrrp-protocol-error-event[
             protocol-error-reason='checksum-error']/"
      }
   }

       Figure 16: Establishing a Subscription Error Reason via XPath

...

   POST /restconf/operations
        /ietf-subscribed-notifications:modify-subscription

   {
      "ietf-subscribed-notifications:input": {
         "stream": "NETCONF",
         "stream-subtree-filter": {
           "/ietf-vrrp:vrrp-protocol-error-event" : {}
         }
      }
   }
                Figure 17: Example "modify-subscription" RPC


Notes
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* There is a missing CRLF in both figures as per RFC9112:

--
  HTTP-message   = start-line CRLF
                   *( field-line CRLF )
                   CRLF
                   [ message-body ]
--

* The last item in the JSON of figure 16 includes a trailing "," while it shouldn't.

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RFC8650 (draft-ietf-netconf-restconf-notif-15)
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Title               : Dynamic Subscription to YANG Events and Datastores over RESTCONF
Publication Date    : November 2019
Author(s)           : E. Voit, R. Rahman, E. Nilsen-Nygaard, A. Clemm, A. Bierman
Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
Source              : Network Configuration
Area                : Operations and Management
Stream              : IETF
Verifying Party     : IESG

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