[Netconf] FW: DISCUSS and COMMENT: draft-ietf-netconf-monitoring

"Romascanu, Dan (Dan)" <dromasca@avaya.com> Thu, 17 June 2010 11:53 UTC

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A new DISCUSS - please address the issues raised by Adrian. 

Thanks and Regards,

Dan


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Subject: DISCUSS and COMMENT: draft-ietf-netconf-monitoring 

Discuss:

I think [4741bis] is used normatively. Please makeit a normative
reference.

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Aren't the RFCs cited from Reference clauses really normative
references?

(As Dave says, to avoid citation issues, you should include some text
such as...

"This module makes use of references to [1], [2], ..." )

Comment:

Section 3.1

Are there no other negative responses to get-schema? What about policy
failures?

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Please think about whether the Reference clauses that cite RFC4741
should actually point to 4741bis.