[Netconf] review of draft-ietf-netconf-ssh-client-server-03 and draft-ietf-netconf-tls-client-server-03

Juergen Schoenwaelder <j.schoenwaelder@jacobs-university.de> Thu, 03 August 2017 11:26 UTC

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Subject: [Netconf] review of draft-ietf-netconf-ssh-client-server-03 and draft-ietf-netconf-tls-client-server-03
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Hi,

I took a look at both documents today and I am attaching my two
reviews.  Since the structure of the documents is quite similar, the
review comments are also quite similar.

/js

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