[Netconf] Review of NETCONF NMDA draft
Mahesh Jethanandani <mjethanandani@gmail.com> Tue, 30 January 2018 01:23 UTC
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Subject: [Netconf] Review of NETCONF NMDA draft
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I support the publication of this draft, and I believe this work is important. Minor comment. s/REF Editor/RFC Editor/ Remaining comments. Section 2 Robert has already commented on “/yang-library/checksum”, so I expect that authors will update it as a reference?? Section 3.1.1 I am confused by the term “source datastore”. Isn’t source one of the parameters for 'datastore' (as stated below in the draft)? Would it then not make sense to s/source datastore/source parameter of the datastore/? Same for “target datastore”. YANG model There is a reference to RFC 7950 in the model in the description statement of ‘xpath-filter’. Should there be a reference statement also just like ‘subtree-filter’ has a reference to RFC 6241? Mahesh Jethanandani mjethanandani@gmail.com
- [Netconf] Review of NETCONF NMDA draft Mahesh Jethanandani