[Netconf] Benjamin Kaduk's No Objection on draft-ietf-netconf-nmda-netconf-06: (with COMMENT)

Benjamin Kaduk <kaduk@mit.edu> Wed, 26 September 2018 17:52 UTC

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Subject: [Netconf] Benjamin Kaduk's No Objection on draft-ietf-netconf-nmda-netconf-06: (with COMMENT)
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Benjamin Kaduk has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-netconf-nmda-netconf-06: No Objection

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Thanks for the well-written document!

I only had one comment, namely that Sections 3.1.1.1 and 3.1.2 end with text that
certain behavior for non-8342 datastores "SHOULD be defined by the specification
for the datastore", and it wasn't entirely clear to me that the 2119 SHOULD was
necessary (since it would be attempting to constrain the behavior of future specifications,
which is always a bit dicey since they could just update this specification to remove
the constraint anyway).