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Re: [netconf] [Last-Call] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-netconf-trust-anchors-22

Lars Eggert <lars@eggert.org> Thu, 01 February 2024 11:38 UTC

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From: Lars Eggert <lars@eggert.org>
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Date: Thu, 01 Feb 2024 13:38:19 +0200
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Subject: Re: [netconf] [Last-Call] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-netconf-trust-anchors-22
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Paul, thank you for your review. I have entered a No Objection ballot for this document.

Lars


> On Jan 22, 2024, at 21:09, Paul Kyzivat <pkyzivat@alum.mit.edu> wrote:
> 
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
> by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just
> like any other last call comments.
> 
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> Document: draft-ietf-netconf-trust-anchors-22
> Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat
> Review Date: 2024-01-24
> IETF LC End Date: 2024-01-24
> IESG Telechat date: ?
> 
> Summary:
> 
> This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should be fixed before publication.
> 
> Note: This review was cursory because this reviewer is ignorant of Yang, and so cannot say anything meaningful about the substance of the document.
> 
> NITS: 2
> 
> 1) NIT: section 1:
> 
> s/references truststore instances./references to truststore instances./
> 
> 2) NIT: section 2.1.3.5
> 
> s/containing in inner list/containing an inner list/
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