[netconf] draft-netana-netconf-notif-envelope-02

Reshad Rahman <reshad@yahoo.com> Tue, 04 February 2025 02:28 UTC

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From: Reshad Rahman <reshad@yahoo.com>
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Hi,
I just took a quick look at the doc.
Intro 2nd paragraph, is there a "not" missing (added below)?
   The notification container from YANG-Push is currently based on the
   XML model from NETCONF Event Notifications [RFC5277].  This model has
   the drawback that only a single mandatory "eventTime" leaf is defined
   and does not offer a way to extend this header with new notification
   metadata.
Section 3.1, is that first sentence needed since the node is read-only? If it is kept, consider replacing the "MUST" with "can"?
As for the second sentence, I think you mean that "if it is to be changed then it has to be changed prior to the creation..."?
   This node 'enable-notification-envelope' MUST be enabled and disabled
   via the RPC 'enable-notif-envelope' only.  This node MUST be changed
   prior to the creation of any Dynamic Subscriptions. 
Regards,Reshad.