Re: [netconf] Yangdoctors last call review of draft-ietf-netconf-notification-capabilities-05

Balázs Lengyel <balazs.lengyel@ericsson.com> Tue, 05 November 2019 15:15 UTC

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To: Kent Watsen <kent@watsen.net>, Ladislav Lhotka <lhotka@nic.cz>, "draft-ietf-netconf-notification-capabilities@ietf.org" <draft-ietf-netconf-notification-capabilities@ietf.org>
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Hello,

I have updated the draft, but missed the dead-line, so I can’t upload it.  I
will upload it when possible.  I attached it to this mail.

The changes are small, so I hope it is not a big problem.

 

I accepted + corrected all comments except 2 from Lada, which I do not fully
understand, as described in a reply to him.

Regards Balazs

 

P.S. very busy with Yangifying 3GPP  :-)

 

From: Kent Watsen <kent@watsen.net> 
Sent: 2019. november 1., péntek 16:46
To: Ladislav Lhotka <lhotka@nic.cz>cz>;
draft-ietf-netconf-notification-capabilities@ietf.org
Cc: netconf@ietf.org
Subject: Re: [netconf] Yangdoctors last call review of
draft-ietf-netconf-notification-capabilities-05

 

[moving yang-doctors to BCC]

 

 

Thank you Lada.

 

Authors, please update the draft as needed to address these YANG Doctor
comments.

 

Kent // as Shepherd

 

 

 





On Oct 29, 2019, at 3:10 AM, Ladislav Lhotka via Datatracker
<noreply@ietf.org <mailto:noreply@ietf.org> > wrote:

 

Reviewer: Ladislav Lhotka
Review result: Ready with Nits

***** Section 2. Introduction
     - Paragraph 3: the use of MAY is inappropriate: publishers
       indeed may have limitations, but this should follow from RFC
       8641, and this document should take it as a fact.
***** Section 3. Notification Capability Model
     - The use of RFC 2119 terms is again questionable: I understand
       the ietf-notification-capabilities data as an optional aid for
       the implementors, but requiring that "The file SHALL be
       available in implementation time ..." is way too strict.
***** Section 3.2. YANG Module
     - This is one of the cases where it would be helpful to know
       which of the imported modules, such as ietf-netconf-acm, is
       also intended to be implemented. This may be addressed in a
       future YANG version (see issue #95 in yang-next), until then I
       would suggest to include YANG library data describing a
       minimum implementation.
***** Appendix A. Instance data examples
     - Example in Fig. 2: the <datastore> element has an incorrect
       XML namespace (of the ietf-datastores module).
     - Many enum values are invalid because they contain
       leading/trailing whitespace. It would be better to encode the
       examples in JSON.


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