Re: [netconf] [Technical Errata Reported] RFC8572 (7223)

Kent Watsen <kent+ietf@watsen.net> Tue, 01 November 2022 15:50 UTC

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From: Kent Watsen <kent+ietf@watsen.net>
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Subject: Re: [netconf] [Technical Errata Reported] RFC8572 (7223)
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This Errata should be rejected.

Per the note beneath the diagram and the last paragraph in that section (Section 5.2), alternate config mechanisms MAY be used and they SHOULD unset the "flag enabling SZTP bootstrapping", which is what Step 1 tests.

Kent // as author



> On Nov 1, 2022, at 9:24 AM, RFC Errata System <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org> wrote:
> 
> The following errata report has been submitted for RFC8572,
> "Secure Zero Touch Provisioning (SZTP)".
> 
> --------------------------------------
> You may review the report below and at:
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid7223
> 
> --------------------------------------
> Type: Technical
> Reported by: Nikolai Malykh <nmalykh@ieee.org>
> 
> Section: 5.2
> 
> Original Text
> -------------
>    4.  Loop back to Step 1
> 
> 
> Corrected Text
> --------------
>    4.  Loop back to Step 2
> 
> 
> Notes
> -----
> There is no need to repeat step 1.
> 
> Instructions:
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> 
> --------------------------------------
> RFC8572 (draft-ietf-netconf-zerotouch-29)
> --------------------------------------
> Title               : Secure Zero Touch Provisioning (SZTP)
> Publication Date    : April 2019
> Author(s)           : K. Watsen, I. Farrer, M. Abrahamsson
> Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
> Source              : Network Configuration
> Area                : Operations and Management
> Stream              : IETF
> Verifying Party     : IESG