[netext] review of draft-ietf-netext-pmip6-qos-07.txt
Liu Dapeng <maxpassion@gmail.com> Thu, 28 November 2013 08:43 UTC
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Subject: [netext] review of draft-ietf-netext-pmip6-qos-07.txt
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Hi All, I have read the draft: draft-ietf-netext-pmip6-qos-07.txt. In general I think it is useful and in a good shape. Some minor comments: 1. Section 6 discusses the WLAN-3GPP network interworking use case. PMIPv6 can also be used as S5/S8 interface. Is it necessary to add this as one use case? 2. Section 4.2. This is no definition of 'Value'? Thanks, ------ Best Regards, Dapeng Liu