[netlmm] Document shepherd write-up for draft-ietf-netlmm-proxymip6
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Subject: [netlmm] Document shepherd write-up for draft-ietf-netlmm-proxymip6
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Shepherd Write-Up for draft-ietf-netlmm-proxymip6 # (1.a) Who is the Document Shepherd for this document? Has the Document # Shepherd personally reviewed this version of the document and, in particular, # does he or she believe this version is ready for forwarding to the IESG for # publication? Document Shepherd is Jonne Soininen (WG co-Chair for NETLMM). I have personally processed and reviewed the document and I do believe the document is ready to be forwarded for publication # (1.b) Has the document had adequate review both from key WG members and from # key non-WG members? Does the Document Shepherd have any concerns about the # depth or breadth of the reviews that have been performed? The document has had extensive review by the WG. An extential WGLC was conducted. # (1.c) Does the Document Shepherd have concerns that the document needs more # review from a particular or broader perspective, e.g., security, operational # complexity, someone familiar with AAA, internationalization or XML? As the document shepherd, I have no concerns on the extensivity of the review of the document. # (1.d) Does the Document Shepherd have any specific concerns or issues with # this document that the Responsible Area Director and/or the IESG should be # aware of? For example, perhaps he or she is uncomfortable with certain parts # of the document, or has concerns whether there really is a need for it. In # any event, if the WG has discussed those issues and has indicated that it # still wishes to advance the document, detail those concerns here. Has an # IPR disclosure related to this document been filed? If so, please include a # reference to the disclosure and summarize the WG discussion and conclusion # on this issue. I have no concerns on the document. There have been multiple IPR disclosures on the document - both as a WG version and as individual-draft. This area is extremely thoroughly researched, and almost everything that relates to mobile, wireless network mobility has been protected by IPR. Thus, it is practically impossible to find a square inch of area in these technologies that would not be patented somewhere. IPR disclosures: Two disclosures to the WG document version: 2008-01-04 911 Nokia Siemens Networks Oy's Statement about IPR related to draft-ietf-netlmm-proxymip6-08 (https://datatracker.ietf.org/ipr/911/) 2007-08-28 881 Nortel Networks Limited's Statement about IPR claimed in draft-ietf-netlmm-proxymip6-01.txt (https://datatracker.ietf.org/ipr/881/) disclosures on previous versions of the document: 2007-04-10 834 QUALCOMM Incorporated's statement about IPR claimed in draft-sgundave-mip6-proxymip6-02.txt (https://datatracker.ietf.org/ipr/834/) 2007-03-15 822 Samsung Electronics's statement about IPR claimed in draft-sgundave-mip6-proxymip6-02.txt (https://datatracker.ietf.org/ipr/822/) 2007-02-28 807 Cisco's Statement about IPR claimed in draft-sgundave-mip6-proxymip6 (https://datatracker.ietf.org/ipr/807/) 2006-11-06 756 Nokia Corporation's statement about IPR claimed in draft-sgundave-mipv6-proxymipv6-00.txt (https://datatracker.ietf.org/ipr/756/) # (1.e) How solid is the WG consensus behind this document? Does it # represent the strong concurrence of a few individuals, with others # being silent, or does the WG as a whole understand and agree with it? There is a strong consensus behind the document. # (1.f) Has anyone threatened an appeal or otherwise indicated extreme # discontent? If so, please summarise the areas of conflict in separate # email messages to the Responsible Area Director. (It should be in a # separate email because this questionnaire is entered into the ID Tracker.) Nobody has threatned to appeal and the document is product of the whole WG effort. However, the WG went through an analysis of using a new protocol versus building on Mobile IPv6 to meet the goals of NETLMM. There were extensive debates about the merits of each solution and the consensus eventually was to go with a Proxy Mobile IPv6 based approach. At the time (around Jan 2007), there were some strong objections to the decision and some talk of a potential appeal. However, no such discussion has happened recently and the current protocol document is a product of the WG as a whole. # (1.g) Has the Document Shepherd personally verified that the document # satisfies all ID nits? (See http://www.ietf.org/ID-Checklist.html and # http://tools.ietf.org/tools/idnits/). Boilerplate checks are not # enough; this check needs to be thorough. Has the document met all formal # review criteria it needs to, such as the MIB Doctor, media type and URI # type reviews? Yes, I run the nits script on the draft and it gave no warnings or errors # (1.h) Has the document split its references into normative and informative? # Are there normative references to documents that are not ready for # advancement or are otherwise in an unclear state? If such normative # references exist, what is the strategy for their completion? Are there # normative references that are downward references, as described in # [RFC3967]? If so, list these downward references to support the Area # Director in the Last Call procedure for them [RFC3967]. There is a split to normative and informative references. There are no normative documents that would be in a dubious state. # (1.i) Has the Document Shepherd verified that the document IANA # consideration section exists and is consistent with the body of the # document? If the document specifies protocol extensions, are reservations # requested in appropriate IANA registries? Are the IANA registries clearly # identified? If the document creates a new registry, does it define the # proposed initial contents of the registry and an allocation procedure for # future registrations? Does it suggest a reasonable name for the new # registry? See [RFC2434]. If the document describes an Expert Review # process has Shepherd conferred with the Responsible Area Director so that # the IESG can appoint the needed Expert during the IESG Evaluation? Yes, IANA considerations section does exist and seems to be in line with the rest of the document. # (1.j) Has the Document Shepherd verified that sections of the document that # are written in a formal language, such as XML code, BNF rules, MIB # definitions, etc., validate correctly in an automated checker? No formal languange segments exist. # (1.k) The IESG approval announcement includes a Document Announcement # Write-Up. Please provide such a Document Announcement Write-Up? Recent # examples can be found in the "Action" announcements for approved documents. # The approval announcement contains the following sections: Technical Summary Proxy Mobile IPv6 enables IP mobility for a host without requiring its participation in any mobility related signaling. Instead, the Network is responsible for managing IP mobility on behalf of the host. Working Group Summary There is a consensus in Netlmm WG that this specification is ready to be published as a proposed standard. Document Quality The document has gone through various reviews and a successful WGLC. Personel Responsible AD is Jari Arkko and the document shepherd is Jonne Soininen. -- Jonne Soininen Nokia Siemens Networks Tel: +358 40 527 46 34 E-mail: jonne.soininen@nsn.com _______________________________________________ netlmm mailing list netlmm@ietf.org https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/netlmm
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