Re: [netmod] Alexey Melnikov's Yes on draft-ietf-netmod-rfc6087bis-18: (with COMMENT)

Benoit Claise <bclaise@cisco.com> Wed, 07 March 2018 10:27 UTC

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Subject: Re: [netmod] Alexey Melnikov's Yes on draft-ietf-netmod-rfc6087bis-18: (with COMMENT)
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Alexey,
> Alexey Melnikov has entered the following ballot position for
> draft-ietf-netmod-rfc6087bis-18: Yes
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> Thank you for a great document. Some minor comments:
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> 3.8.  IANA Considerations Section
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>     In order to comply with IESG policy as set forth in
>     http://www.ietf.org/id-info/checklist.html, every Internet-Draft that
>     is submitted to the IESG for publication MUST contain an IANA
>     Considerations section.  The requirements for this section vary
>     depending on what actions are required of the IANA.  If there are no
>     IANA considerations applicable to the document, then the IANA
>     Considerations section stating that there are no actions is removed
>     by the RFC Editor before publication.
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> IANA's and RFC Editor opinion about empty IANA Considerations section has
> changed over time (and might change again), so I would not make this statement.
> I don't think this is necessarily the current policy. RFC Editor asks, but
> doesn't enforce this. So I suggest changing "is removed" to "might be removed".
That makes sense.
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> [I-D.ietf-netmod-revised-datastores] - I am pretty sure that some uses of this
> document are normative, so you should move it to Normative References.
Well spot. This is required by the terminology section 2.4


Regards, Benoit
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