[netmod] Re: WG Last Call: draft-ietf-netmod-acl-extensions-06

[Lou Berger <[e-mail]>]

Med, Authors,

Thank you for the excellent update.

WG,

Please look at the differences in the documents.  I see the changes as 
editorial, but important. You may find the following helpful in 
reviewing the changes.

https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url1=draft-ietf-netmod-acl-extensions-06&url2=draft-ietf-netmod-acl-extensions-10&difftype=--html

I intend to submit for publication in about 2 weeks -- assuming no new 
objections.

Thank you,

Lou (as Shepherd)

On 5/24/2024 10:27 AM, [e-mail] wrote:
>
> Hi Lou,
>
> Thank you for catching this.
>
> Please check the candidate changes here: Diff: 
> draft-ietf-netmod-acl-extensions-08.txt - 
> draft-ietf-netmod-acl-extensions.txt 
> <https://author-tools.ietf.org/api/iddiff?doc_1=draft-ietf-netmod-acl-extensions&url_2=https://netmod-wg.github.io/enhanced-acl-netmod/draft-ietf-netmod-acl-extensions.txt>
>
> Let’s know if any further change is needed.
>
> Cheers,
>
> Med
>
> *De :* Lou Berger <[e-mail]>
> *Envoyé :* vendredi 24 mai 2024 14:51
> *À :* BOUCADAIR Mohamed INNOV/NET <[e-mail]>; 
> [e-mail]
> *Cc :* NetMod WG Chairs <[e-mail]>; NETMOD Group 
> <[e-mail]>
> *Objet :* Re: [netmod] Re: WG Last Call: 
> draft-ietf-netmod-acl-extensions-06
>
>
> Thank you Med/Authors!
>
> As part of preparing my write up, I caught the following nit:
>
> References for VLAN are missing in general, and I-SID are missing from 
> the module.  I think it would be good add these. (See rfc8519 for an 
> example VLAN description/reference.)
>
> WG,
>
> Please review the changes (see, wdiff 
> draft-ietf-netmod-acl-extensions-06.txt 
> draft-ietf-netmod-acl-extensions-08.txt 
> <https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url1=draft-ietf-netmod-acl-extensions-06&url2=draft-ietf-netmod-acl-extensions-08&difftype=--hwdiff>) 
> and send any comments you have.  We are NOT planning an additional WG 
> last call prior to submission.
>
> Thank you,
>
> Lou
>
> On 5/16/2024 8:08 AM, [e-mail] wrote:
>
>     Hi Lou,
>
>     Already shared on the list how -07 addresses the pending comments from Mahesh and Qiufang.
>
>     I think -08 is now ready for the next step. Thanks.
>
>     Cheers,
>
>     Med
>
>         -----Message d'origine-----
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>         De : Lou Berger<[e-mail]>  <mailto:[e-mail]>
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>         Envoyé : mardi 14 mai 2024 15:10
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>         À : NETMOD Group<[e-mail]>  <mailto:[e-mail]>
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>         Cc : NetMod WG Chairs<[e-mail]>  <mailto:[e-mail]>
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>         Objet : [netmod] Re: WG Last Call: draft-ietf-netmod-acl-
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>         extensions-06
>
>         Hi,
>
>         The WG poll has triggered some good comment.
>
>         Authors,
>
>         Please address all comments received and publish a new version.
>
>         Please also let the WG know how each comment is addressed.
>
>         Thank you,
>
>         Lou
>
>         On 4/29/2024 5:41 PM, Lou Berger wrote:
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>             All,
>
>             This starts working group last call on
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>             The working group last call ends on May 13th.
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>             Please send your comments to the working group mailing list.
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>             Positive comments, e.g., "I've reviewed this document and
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>             This is useful and important, even from authors.
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>             Thank you,
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>             Lou (Co-Chair & doc Shepherd)
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