Re: [netmod] I-D Action: draft-ietf-netmod-rfc6991-bis-14.txt

Kent Watsen <kent+ietf@watsen.net> Mon, 05 December 2022 13:24 UTC

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Thanks for this update Juergen.  I was just thinking this morning to ping you on it.


ietf-yang-types:

1) The table in the "Overview" section needs to reflect new names (e.g., s/date/date-with-zone-offset/)
2) The "revision" statement needs to reflect new names (e.g., s/with-zone/with-zone-offset/)
3) There are two "time-with-zone-offset" typedefs (one should be "time-without-zone-offset"?)
4) Is the "-offset" postfix needed?  Or maybe remove the "-zone" part and only have "-offset"?


Ietf-inet-types:

1) "*-address-and-prefix" instead of "*-address-with-zone"?
2) no deprecation of the legacy "*-address" types?


PS: Diff2 shows nearly everything changed.  Diff1 is correct:
       https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?difftype=--hwdiff&url2=draft-ietf-netmod-rfc6991-bis-14.txt


Kent // as Shepherd



> On Dec 5, 2022, at 6:28 AM, internet-drafts@ietf.org wrote:
> 
> 
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
> This draft is a work item of the Network Modeling WG of the IETF.
> 
>        Title           : Common YANG Data Types
>        Author          : Jürgen Schönwälder
>  Filename        : draft-ietf-netmod-rfc6991-bis-14.txt
>  Pages           : 43
>  Date            : 2022-12-05
> 
> Abstract:
>   This document defines a collection of common data types to be used
>   with the YANG data modeling language.  This version of the document
>   adds several new type definitions and obsoletes RFC 6991.
> 
> 
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-netmod-rfc6991-bis/
> 
> There is also an HTML version available at:
> https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-netmod-rfc6991-bis-14.html
> 
> A diff from the previous version is available at:
> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-netmod-rfc6991-bis-14
> 
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