[netmod] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC8407 (7791)

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The following errata report has been submitted for RFC8407,
"Guidelines for Authors and Reviewers of Documents Containing YANG Data Models".

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You may review the report below and at:
https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid7791

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Type: Editorial
Reported by: Dale R. Worley <[e-mail]>

Section: GLOBAL

Original Text
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There are two related items.

1) Section 3.7.1 "Security Considerations Section Template" begins

   X.  Security Considerations

   The YANG module specified in this document defines a schema for data
   that is designed to be accessed via network management protocols such
   as NETCONF [RFC6241] or RESTCONF [RFC8040].  The lowest NETCONF layer
   is the secure transport layer, and the mandatory-to-implement secure
   transport is Secure Shell (SSH) [RFC6242].  The lowest RESTCONF layer
   is HTTPS, and the mandatory-to-implement secure transport is TLS
   [RFC8446].

2) RFC 8470 says "the latest approved template (available at
<https://trac.ietf.org/trac/ops/wiki/yang-security-guidelines>)".  But
the template at that URL says "the latest approved template (available
at
http://trac.tools.ietf.org/area/ops/trac/wiki/yang-security-guidelines)."


Corrected Text
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1) It would be helpful if the beginning of the template contained a
reference to RFC 8407 to provide a pointer back to where the templated
section of Yang module definitions was instantiated from.  Perhaps
starting the template with "[Instantiated from the template of
[RFC8407] section 3.7.1.]"

2) While the URL given in RFC 8407 works, the URL given in the online
template only goes to a generic page, "Welcome to the IETF Community
Wiki".  Presumably the URL in the online template should be the URL of
that page itself.



Notes
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Item (2) is a straightforward correction.  Item (1) is in service to
having better pointers/references in our documents.

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RFC8407 (draft-ietf-netmod-rfc6087bis-20)
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Title               : Guidelines for Authors and Reviewers of Documents Containing YANG Data Models
Publication Date    : October 2018
Author(s)           : A. Bierman
Category            : BEST CURRENT PRACTICE
Source              : Network Modeling
Area                : Operations and Management
Stream              : IETF
Verifying Party     : IESG