Re: [netmod] Fwd: New Version Notification for draft-lengyel-netmod-yang-instance-data-03.txt

Bob Harold <rharolde@umich.edu> Thu, 23 August 2018 11:59 UTC

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Date: Thu, 23 Aug 2018 07:59:11 -0400
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Subject: Re: [netmod] Fwd: New Version Notification for draft-lengyel-netmod-yang-instance-data-03.txt
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On Thu, Aug 23, 2018 at 4:48 AM Balazs Lengyel <balazs.lengyel@ericsson.com>
wrote:

> Hello,
>
> I updated the draft according to the comments from the IETF102 meeting. I
> am hoping for adoption by the WG now.
>
> regards Balazs
>
>
> -------- Forwarded Message --------
> Subject: New Version Notification for
> draft-lengyel-netmod-yang-instance-data-03.txt
> Date: Sun, 22 Jul 2018 17:25:56 -0700
> From: internet-drafts@ietf.org
> To: Benoit Claise <bclaise@cisco.com> <bclaise@cisco.com>, Balazs Lengyel
> <balazs.lengyel@ericsson.com> <balazs.lengyel@ericsson.com>
>
> A new version of I-D, draft-lengyel-netmod-yang-instance-data-03.txt
> has been successfully submitted by Balazs Lengyel and posted to the
> IETF repository.
>
> Name:		draft-lengyel-netmod-yang-instance-data
> Revision:	03
> Title:		YANG Instance Data Files and their use for Documenting Server Capabilities
> Document date:	2018-07-22
> Group:		Individual Submission
> Pages:		12
> URL:            https://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-lengyel-netmod-yang-instance-data-03.txt
> Status:         https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-lengyel-netmod-yang-instance-data/
> Htmlized:       https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-lengyel-netmod-yang-instance-data-03
> Htmlized:       https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-lengyel-netmod-yang-instance-data
> Diff:           https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-lengyel-netmod-yang-instance-data-03
>
> Abstract:
>    This document specifies a standard file format for YANG instance
>    data, that is data that could be stored in a datastore and whose
>    syntax and semantics is defined by YANG models.  Instance data files
>    can be used to provide information that is defined in design time.
>    There is a need to document Server capabilities (which are often
>    specified in design time).  Defining server capabilities is foreseen
>    as the most important use of YANG instance data files.
>
>
>
>
> Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of submission
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>
> The IETF Secretariat
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> --
> Balazs Lengyel                       Ericsson Hungary Ltd.
> Senior Specialist
> Mobile: +36-70-330-7909              email: Balazs.Lengyel@ericsson.com
>
>
Minor typo

In 2.5,
"The operator curerntly has no way to know what the default"

"curerntly" -> "currently"

-- 
Bob Harold

[netmod] Fwd: New Version Notification for draft-… Balazs Lengyel
Re: [netmod] Fwd: New Version Notification for dr… Bob Harold