Re: [netmod] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC7950 (5698)

Ignas Bagdonas <ibagdona@gmail.com> Wed, 24 April 2019 11:20 UTC

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Date: Wed, 24 Apr 2019 12:20:22 +0100
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Subject: Re: [netmod] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC7950 (5698)
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Hi,

Errata verified. Thank you.


On Wed, Apr 24, 2019 at 11:06 AM Martin Bjorklund <mbj@tail-f.com> wrote:

> Hi,
>
> This errata is correct and should be accepted.
>
>
> /martin
>
>
> RFC Errata System <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org> wrote:
> > The following errata report has been submitted for RFC7950,
> > "The YANG 1.1 Data Modeling Language".
> >
> > --------------------------------------
> > You may review the report below and at:
> > http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid5698
> >
> > --------------------------------------
> > Type: Editorial
> > Reported by: Andy Bierman <andy@yumaworks.com>
> >
> > Section: 7.5.4.3
> >
> > Original Text
> > -------------
> >      container interface {
> >        leaf ifType {
> >          type enumeration {
> >            enum ethernet;
> >            enum atm;
> >          }
> >        }
> >        leaf ifMTU {
> >          type uint32;
> >        }
> >        must 'ifType != "ethernet" or ifMTU = 1500' {
> >          error-message "An Ethernet MTU must be 1500";
> >        }
> >        must 'ifType != "atm" or'
> >           + ' (ifMTU <= 17966 and ifMTU >= 64)' {
> >          error-message "An ATM MTU must be 64 .. 17966";
> >        }
> >      }
> >
> >
> > Corrected Text
> > --------------
> >      container interface {
> >        leaf ifType {
> >          type enumeration {
> >            enum ethernet;
> >            enum atm;
> >          }
> >        }
> >        leaf ifMTU {
> >          type uint32;
> >        }
> >        must 'string(ifType) != "ethernet" or ifMTU = 1500' {
> >          error-message "An Ethernet MTU must be 1500";
> >        }
> >        must 'string(ifType) != "atm" or'
> >           + ' (ifMTU <= 17966 and ifMTU >= 64)' {
> >          error-message "An ATM MTU must be 64 .. 17966";
> >        }
> >      }
> >
> >
> > Notes
> > -----
> > The intent of the example is for each must-stmt to be false if the
> ifType leaf does not exist.
> > However the XPath is incorrect.
> >
> > From the XPath 1.0 spec, section 3.4, para 5
> >
> > If one object to be compared is a node-set and the other is a string,
> then the comparison will be true if and only if there is a node in the
> node-set such that the result of performing the comparison on the
> string-value of the node and the other string is true.
> >
> > The empty node-set is not implicitly converted to an empty string for a
> = or != comparison.
> > Instead the string() function must explicitly convert the node-set to a
> string
> >
> > Instructions:
> > -------------
> > This erratum is currently posted as "Reported". If necessary, please
> > use "Reply All" to discuss whether it should be verified or
> > rejected. When a decision is reached, the verifying party
> > can log in to change the status and edit the report, if necessary.
> >
> > --------------------------------------
> > RFC7950 (draft-ietf-netmod-rfc6020bis-14)
> > --------------------------------------
> > Title               : The YANG 1.1 Data Modeling Language
> > Publication Date    : August 2016
> > Author(s)           : M. Bjorklund, Ed.
> > Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
> > Source              : Network Modeling
> > Area                : Operations and Management
> > Stream              : IETF
> > Verifying Party     : IESG
> >
>