Re: [netmod] a few editorial comments on structural-mount-02
Martin Bjorklund <mbj@tail-f.com> Tue, 05 April 2016 09:13 UTC
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Hi Jason, "Sterne, Jason (Nokia - CA)" <jason.sterne@nokia.com> wrote: > Hello, > > A couple of minor points for the structural mount draft that I > noticed while reading it recently: > > The XML instance data in Appendix B seems to have <root> inside the > <transport> context but that doesn't match the YANG model above it. You're right, I'll fix. > It would be great to show an example for section 3.2. There is such an example in Appendix B.1. I'll add a reference to that example from 3.2. /martin
- [netmod] a few editorial comments on structural-m… Sterne, Jason (Nokia - CA)
- Re: [netmod] a few editorial comments on structur… Martin Bjorklund