Re: [netmod] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC7950 (5237)

Benoit Claise <bclaise@cisco.com> Thu, 18 January 2018 19:36 UTC

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Subject: Re: [netmod] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC7950 (5237)
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Thanks.
It's now verified.

Regards, Benoit.
> Hi,
>
> This errata should be applied.  It is an obvious typo.
>
>
> /martin
>
>
>
> RFC Errata System <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org> wrote:
>> The following errata report has been submitted for RFC7950,
>> "The YANG 1.1 Data Modeling Language".
>>
>> --------------------------------------
>> You may review the report below and at:
>> http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid5237
>>
>> --------------------------------------
>> Type: Editorial
>> Reported by: Muly Ilan <muly_i@rad.com>
>>
>> Section: 6.4.1.1
>>
>> Original Text
>> -------------
>> The accessible tree for an action invocation of "reset" on
>> /a/b[id="1"] with the "when" parameter set to "10" would be:
>>
>> <a xmlns="urn:example:a">
>> <b>
>> <id>1</id>
>> <reset>
>> <delay>10</delay>
>> </reset>
>> </b>
>> <b>
>> <id>2</id>
>> </b>
>> </a>
>> // possibly other top-level nodes here
>>
>> Corrected Text
>> --------------
>> The accessible tree for an action invocation of "reset" on
>> /a/b[id="1"] with the "delay" parameter set to "10" would be:
>>
>> <a xmlns="urn:example:a">
>> <b>
>> <id>1</id>
>> <reset>
>> <delay>10</delay>
>> </reset>
>> </b>
>> <b>
>> <id>2</id>
>> </b>
>> </a>
>> // possibly other top-level nodes here
>>
>> Notes
>> -----
>> The example action "reset" has an input parameter named "delay" and not a parameter named "when".
>>
>> Instructions:
>> -------------
>> This erratum is currently posted as "Reported". If necessary, please
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>> rejected. When a decision is reached, the verifying party
>> can log in to change the status and edit the report, if necessary.
>>
>> --------------------------------------
>> RFC7950 (draft-ietf-netmod-rfc6020bis-14)
>> --------------------------------------
>> Title               : The YANG 1.1 Data Modeling Language
>> Publication Date    : August 2016
>> Author(s)           : M. Bjorklund, Ed.
>> Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
>> Source              : Network Modeling
>> Area                : Operations and Management
>> Stream              : IETF
>> Verifying Party     : IESG
>>
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