[netmod] FW: DISCUSS: <draft-ietf-netmod-dsdl-map-08.txt>

"Romascanu, Dan (Dan)" <dromasca@avaya.com> Thu, 21 October 2010 08:40 UTC

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Hi Lada,

Please address the issue raised by Alexey in his DISCUSS. 

Thanks and Regards,

Dan


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Subject: DISCUSS: <draft-ietf-netmod-dsdl-map-08.txt>

Discuss:
This is a well written document, a pleasure to read.

I have one minor issue that I would like to quickly discuss before
recommending approval of this document:


In Section 11.3 (on page 74):

   <?xml version="1.0" encoding="utf-8"?>
   <dsrl:maps xmlns:dsrl="http://purl.oclc.org/dsdl/dsrl"
              xmlns:ex6="http://example.com/ns/example6"
              xmlns:nc="urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:netconf:base:1.0">
     <dsrl:element-map>
       <dsrl:parent>/nc:rpc-reply/nc:data</dsrl:parent>
       <dsrl:name>ex6:outer</dsrl:name>
       <dsrl:default-content>
         <ex6:leaf1>1</ex6:leaf1>
         <ex6:one><ex6:leaf2>2</ex6:leaf2></ex6:one>


This looks like a cut and paste error (extra text), can you please
confirm?

   <?xml version="1.0" encoding="utf-8"?>
   <dsrl:maps xmlns:dsrl="http://purl.oclc.org/dsdl/dsrl"
              xmlns:ex6="http://example.com/ns/example6"
              xmlns:nc="urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:netconf:base:1.0">
     <dsrl:element-map>
       <dsrl:parent>/nc:rpc-reply/nc:data</dsrl:parent>
       <dsrl:name>ex6:outer</dsrl:name>
       <dsrl:default-content>
         <ex6:leaf1>1</ex6:leaf1>
         <ex6:one>
           <ex6:leaf2>2</ex6:leaf2>
         </ex6:one>
       </dsrl:default-content>
     </dsrl:element-map>

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