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Re: [netmod] WG Last Call: draft-ietf-netmod-acl-model-01.txt

Juergen Schoenwaelder <j.schoenwaelder@jacobs-university.de> Fri, 06 February 2015 20:15 UTC

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From: Juergen Schoenwaelder <j.schoenwaelder@jacobs-university.de>
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Subject: Re: [netmod] WG Last Call: draft-ietf-netmod-acl-model-01.txt
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On Fri, Feb 06, 2015 at 01:59:30PM -0500, Thomas D. Nadeau wrote:
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> This commences a NETMOD WG Last call for draft-ietf-netmod-acl-model-01.txt.  Please send comments to the list by 20-FEB-2015 by 9AM EST.
>

Before I read this in detail already a few quick comments:

- The module name 'packet-fields' should follow RFC 6020 guidelines.

- Non-normative example modules should be in an appendix marked as
  non-normative.

- The security considerations include a TBD action item.

- If ietf-route-filter.yang is an example, I would probably give it a
  different name that has less chance to be confused with an official
  module.

/js

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