Re: [netmod] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC8342 (5362)

Juergen Schoenwaelder <j.schoenwaelder@jacobs-university.de> Thu, 17 May 2018 06:08 UTC

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Date: Thu, 17 May 2018 08:08:35 +0200
From: Juergen Schoenwaelder <j.schoenwaelder@jacobs-university.de>
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Subject: Re: [netmod] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC8342 (5362)
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I agree, we screwed this up. These references should have not been
updated to the new versions.

/js

On Wed, May 16, 2018 at 09:25:34PM -0700, RFC Errata System wrote:
> The following errata report has been submitted for RFC8342,
> "Network Management Datastore Architecture (NMDA)".
> 
> --------------------------------------
> You may review the report below and at:
> http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid5362
> 
> --------------------------------------
> Type: Editorial
> Reported by: Rohit R Ranade <rohitrranade@huawei.com>
> 
> Section: 2
> 
> Original Text
> -------------
> The convention adopted by the interfaces
>    data model [RFC8343] and the IP data model [RFC8344] was to use two
>    separate branches rooted at the root of the data tree: one branch for
>    configuration data objects and one branch for operational state data
>    objects.
> 
> 
> Corrected Text
> --------------
> The convention adopted by the interfaces
>    data model [RFC7223] and the IP data model [RFC7277] was to use two
>    separate branches rooted at the root of the data tree: one branch for
>    configuration data objects and one branch for operational state data
>    objects.
> 
> 
> Notes
> -----
> The duplication of definition and separation of operational state data and configuration data happened in RFC7223 and RFC7277. RFC8343 and RFC8344 have corrected this using NMDA architecture
> 
> Instructions:
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> 
> --------------------------------------
> RFC8342 (draft-ietf-netmod-revised-datastores-10)
> --------------------------------------
> Title               : Network Management Datastore Architecture (NMDA)
> Publication Date    : March 2018
> Author(s)           : M. Bjorklund, J. Schoenwaelder, P. Shafer, K. Watsen, R. Wilton
> Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
> Source              : Network Modeling
> Area                : Operations and Management
> Stream              : IETF
> Verifying Party     : IESG

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