Re: [netmod] Eric Rescorla's No Objection on draft-ietf-netmod-syslog-model-23: (with COMMENT)

Eric Rescorla <ekr@rtfm.com> Thu, 08 March 2018 13:16 UTC

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From: Eric Rescorla <ekr@rtfm.com>
Date: Thu, 8 Mar 2018 05:15:26 -0800
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To: Benoit Claise <bclaise@cisco.com>
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Subject: Re: [netmod] Eric Rescorla's No Objection on draft-ietf-netmod-syslog-model-23: (with COMMENT)
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On Thu, Mar 8, 2018 at 12:41 AM, Benoit Claise <bclaise@cisco.com>; wrote:

> Eric,
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> Eric Rescorla has entered the following ballot position for
> draft-ietf-netmod-syslog-model-23: No Objection
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> It's not a problem with this document, but I took a quick look at
> draft-ietf-netconf-tls-client-server and I've got some concerns. Here are a few
> examples:
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> - You can set the cipher suite but not key sizes and groups You can
> - say sort of incoherent things in TLS like "I support TLS 1.0 and TLS
>  1.2 but not TLS 1.1" (there is no way to negotiate this in TLS 1.2)
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> I'll try to get a chance to give this a real review, but I wanted to mention it
> before I forgot.
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>    We are using definitions of syslog protocol from [RFC5424] in this
>    RFC.
> Not a big deal, but this introduction feels like it ought to say what the
> document is about, not just about syslog.
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>    The severity is one of type syslog-severity, all severities, or none.
>    None is a special case that can be used to disable a filter.  When
>    filtering severity, the default comparison is that messages of the
> This seems to be the first use of the term filter to mean this entity
>
> I'm not sure I understand the call for action here.
> In the YANG module, we called this facility-filter:
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The introductory text here says:

"

   Within each action, a selector is used to filter syslog messages.  A
   selector consists of a list of one or more facility-severity matches,
   and, if supported via the select-match feature, an optional regular
   expression pattern match that is performed on the [RFC5424] field."

Perhaps"

"A selector consists of a list of one or more filters specified by
facility-severity pairs and, if supported..."


       container facility-filter {
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>          description
>            "This container describes the syslog filter parameters.";
>          list facility-list {
>            ...
>
>          subtree, implementations MUST NOT specify a private key that is
>          used for any other purpose.
> It seems like the data that syslog writes is sensitive, so the ability to write
> a destination reflects a high degree of risk.
>
> Again, what is the call for action here?
>

That the text say that writing those fields is dangerous. This is related
to the secdir review comment that Kathleenamplifies in her comment.

-Ekr


> Regards, B.
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