Re: [netmod] WG Last Call: draft-ietf-netmod-schema-mount-07

On Sat, 2017-11-04 at 15:03 -0400, Christian Hopps wrote:
> I've reviewed this draft (-08), and I think it's ready for publication.
> 
> A nit, the text:
> 
> Page 4 item 3: "The mounted schema is defined by instance data that is
> part of the mounted data model."

So would it be better to say "... is defined by a new instance of YANG library
that is a part of the mounted data model."?

Thanks, Lada

> 
> Seems pretty complex if all it's trying to say is "It is what it is".
> 
> Thanks,
> Chris.
> 
> 
> Kent Watsen <kwatsen@juniper.net> writes:
> 
> > All,
> > 
> > This starts a two-week working group last call on
> > draft-ietf-netmod-schema-mount-07.
> > 
> > The working group last call ends on November 3.
> > Please send your comments to the netmod mailing list.
> > 
> > Positive comments, e.g., "I've reviewed this document
> > and believe it is ready for publication", are welcome!
> > This is useful and important, even from authors.
> > 
> > Could the authors, explicitly CC-ed on this email,
> > please also confirm one more time that they are
> > unaware of any IPR related to this draft.
> > 
> > Thank you,
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> > 
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