[netmod] Roman Danyliw's No Objection on draft-ietf-netmod-syslog-model-32: (with COMMENT)

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Roman Danyliw has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-netmod-syslog-model-32: No Objection

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Thank you to Francis Dupont for the GENART review.

** Section 10 says “ There are no RPC operations defined in this YANG module.” 
However, in Figure 1 there is:

                 |  |  +---x generate-csr {csr-generation}?

Which appears to be generate-csr-grouping from draft-ietf-netconf-crypto-types.

Should the Security Considerations of draft-ietf-netconf-crypto-types be
mentioned?  Is this Section 10 language of “no RPC operations defined”accurate
– is it because the thinking is that this functionality is imported (via
ct:asymmetric-key-pair-with-cert-grouping)?