[nfsv4] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-nfsv4-federated-fs-protocol-13

Chuck Lever <chuck.lever@oracle.com> Mon, 22 October 2012 19:37 UTC

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Subject: [nfsv4] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-nfsv4-federated-fs-protocol-13
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Hi-

Gen-ART review comment:

> Section 4.2.2.2, 5th paragraph: how is the prohibition on referencing
> other attributes in the fedfsFsn object class supposed to work if this
> document is the defining document for that object class?


The referenced paragraph, in it's entirety:

> A fedfsFsn MAY also have additional attributes, but these attributes
> MUST NOT be referenced by any part of this document.

Does anyone recall why this language is here?

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Chuck Lever
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