Re: [nfsv4] Adam Roach's No Objection on draft-ietf-nfsv4-umask-03: (with COMMENT)

bfields@fieldses.org (J. Bruce Fields) Tue, 27 June 2017 20:37 UTC

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Subject: Re: [nfsv4] Adam Roach's No Objection on draft-ietf-nfsv4-umask-03: (with COMMENT)
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On Wed, May 24, 2017 at 03:31:52PM -0700, Adam Roach wrote:
> Please expand "ACL" and "ACE" on first use and in the title.

OK, done:

	http://git.linux-nfs.org/?p=bfields/NFSv4-umask.git;a=commitdiff;h=79ed0f4538e29b3e5158ad9cacb8233464a1ce58

> Section 5 uses an all-caps "RECOMMENDATION," which is confusable with
> (but not) an RFC2119 term. If this is intended to be invoke RFC2119
> terminology, please rephrase with "RECOMMENDED" or "SHOULD."  If not,
> please remove the capitalization or change to a synonym that is less
> confusable with "RECOMMENDED."

I think the attempted RFC2119 term is probably overkill anyway, going
with lowercase:

	http://git.linux-nfs.org/?p=bfields/NFSv4-umask.git;a=commitdiff;h=5eff40824174fdb9ab68844742219c829812da0a

Thanks!

--b.