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Re: [nmrg] RG Last Call for draft-irtf-nmrg-ibn-concepts-definitions

Jérôme François <jerome.francois@inria.fr> Tue, 27 October 2020 07:53 UTC

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Subject: Re: [nmrg] RG Last Call for draft-irtf-nmrg-ibn-concepts-definitions
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Dear all,

Attached are some comments to the drafts (CREF references in the text).
The draft is in a very good shape. My remarks mostly concern the style/typos 
except the one about life-cycle. I think this might not be clear for an external 
reader to see  the mapping of the IBN functionalities to the lifecycle (should 
maybe be explicit)

Best,
jerome

Le 06/10/2020 à 23:59, Jérôme François a écrit :
> Dear all,
>
> As expressed during NMRG September interim meeting, authors of draft "Intent-Based Networking - Concepts and Definitions" would like to publish it as informational RFC and so enter in the publication process*:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-irtf-nmrg-ibn-concepts-definitions/
>
> This process starts by the review of the document by the group. So, please provide feedback on the technical and editorial quality of the document by*October 21st *
> Best regards,
> Jérôme and Laurent
> NMRG chairs
>
> *https://trac.ietf.org/trac/irtf/wiki/IRTF-RFCs

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