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孙雪媛 <sunxy11@chinatelecom.cn> Thu, 21 November 2019 07:56 UTC

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From: 孙雪媛 <sunxy11@chinatelecom.cn>
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Subject: Re: [nmrg] New Version Notification for draft-li-nmrg-intent-classification-02.txt
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Hi Olga,
I noticed that the draft has been added intent classification table in section five. Is there a consideration for adding  the correspondence between the content of the section five  and the description of the intention translation of AI in section seven? I think this would make the draft more complete. 

Best Regards,
Xueyuan SUN



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From: Olga Havel
Date: 2019-11-18 22:22
To: nmrg@irtf.org
CC: draft-li-nmrg-intent-classification@ietf.org
Subject: [nmrg] New Version Notification for draft-li-nmrg-intent-classification-02.txt
Hi,
 
We’ve just uploaded 02 version of intent classification draft (https://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-li-nmrg-intent-classification-02.txt) according to the comments in the list and offline discussions. 
 
Updates from previous version from July:
1.                   Addressed Brain’s comments about “Adding solid use cases”. Addressed by adding use cases in section 3.2.
2.                   Addressed Diego’s comments about “Provide a framework for further intent evolution”.  Addressed by adding a new draft: draft-sun-nmrg-intent-framework-00
3.                   Addressed Laurent’s comments “Suggest to use parameter/classification table to do classification”. Addressed by adding the whole Section 5 with classification tables for Carrier, DC and Enterprise. 
4.                   Addressed comments from Ericsson “Classify based on granularity is not accurate, may change granularity to abstraction of service description”. Addressed by changing Section 4.2 from Granularity Section to Feedback Section and adding column Abstraction to the classification table.
5.                   Chapters 5 and 6 became 6 and 7, as a result of adding new chapter 5 
6.                   Section 7: Added explanation about AI related content
7.                   Moved the sections of Policy Continuum and AI after the section for Intent Classification Table
8.                   Updated contributors
9.                   Fixed document format and typos
 
Your comments and contributions are welcome!.
 
Best Regards,
Olga

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