Re: [Ntp] [EXT] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ntp-ntpv5-requirements-04.txt

I've created a pull request to address some of the feedback from 
Ulrich.  It can be viewed at:

https://github.com/fiestajetsam/draft-gruessing-ntp-ntpv5-requirements/pull/43/files

I have not attempted to address every point Ulrich raised, nor have I 
incorporated wording changes where I deemed that they did not improve 
the original.  In my opinion, one think which Ulrich raised is important 
to address in future updates, which is adding references or explanatory 
text to justify the choice to allow server identifiers to change over 
time.  Possibly adding references to explain leap second events in NTP 
might be useful as well.

I have added my own wording adjustments in some cases where I thought 
Ulrich's points were good but the wording could be further improved.  
James, please feel free to adjust as you see fit.

On 27/2/24 17:43, Windl, Ulrich wrote:
> Hi!
>
> Most likely not the format in which contributions are expected, but I commented on the TXT representation, creating a PDF from the ODT document.
> So in case you cannot work with the ODT, you could use the PDF. The ODT was created with LibreOffice Writer, but MS-Word seems to open it as well.
>
> Kind regards,
> Ulrich
>
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> Subject: [EXT] [Ntp] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ntp-ntpv5-requirements-04.txt
>
> Internet-Draft draft-ietf-ntp-ntpv5-requirements-04.txt is now available. It
> is a work item of the Network Time Protocols (NTP) WG of the IETF.
>
>     Title:   NTPv5 Use Cases and Requirements
>     Author:  James Gruessing
>     Name:    draft-ietf-ntp-ntpv5-requirements-04.txt
>     Pages:   11
>     Dates:   2024-01-25
>
> Abstract:
>
>     This document describes the use cases, requirements, and
>     considerations that should be factored in the design of a successor
>     protocol to supersede version 4 of the NTP protocol presently
>     referred to as NTP version 5 ("NTPv5").  It aims to define what
>     capabilities and requirements such a protocol possesses, informing
>     the design of the protocol in addition to capturing any working group
>     consensus made in development.
>
> The IETF datatracker status page for this Internet-Draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ntp-ntpv5-requirements/
>
> There is also an HTML version available at:
> https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-ntp-ntpv5-requirements-04.html
>
> A diff from the previous version is available at:
> https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url2=draft-ietf-ntp-ntpv5-requirements-04
>
> Internet-Drafts are also available by rsync at:
> rsync.ietf.org::internet-drafts
>
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