[Ntp] Antw: [EXT] [Errata Verified] RFC5905 (4680)

>>> RFC Errata System <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org> schrieb am 27.07.2022 um
17:13 in
Nachricht <20220727151309.A1823CD7EF@rfcpa.amsl.com>:
> The following errata report has been verified for RFC5905,
> "Network Time Protocol Version 4: Protocol and Algorithms Specification". 
> 
> ‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑
> You may review the report below and at:
> https://www.rfc‑editor.org/errata/eid4680 
> 
> ‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑
> Status: Verified
> Type: Editorial
> 
> Reported by: Riccardo Brama <r.brama@cmclabs.com>
> Date Reported: 2016‑04‑29
> Verified by: Erik Kline (IESG)
> 
> Section: 6, Fig 3
> 
> Original Text
> ‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑
>        0                   1                   2                   3
>        0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 0 1
>       +‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+
>       |                           Era Number                          |
>       +‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+
>       |                           Era Offset                          |
>       +‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+
>       |                                                               |
>       |                           Fraction                            |
>       |                                                               |
>       +‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+
> 
>                               NTP Date Format
> 
> Corrected Text
> ‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑
>        0                   1                   2                   3
>        0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 0 1
>       +‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+
>       |                           Era Number                          |
>       +‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+
>       |                           Era Offset                          |
>       +‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+
>       |                                                               |
>       +                           Fraction                            +
>       |                                                               |
>       +‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+‑+
> 
>                               NTP Date Format

Actually I'd prefer:
      +-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+
      |                       Fraction (hi)                           |
      +-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+
      |                       Fraction (lo)                           |
      +-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+

Or:
      +-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+
      |                     Fraction (64 bits)                        |
      |                                                               |
      +-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+


> 
> Notes
> ‑‑‑‑‑
> This allows to better appreciate only two 32b rows really form the Fraction

> part, leading to an overall type length of 128b instead of 160b as it could

> otherwise be misunderstood in the original figure.
> 
> ‑‑‑
> 
> The "+" vs "|" on the Fraction line would seem to improve consistency with 
> packet layouts in other documents.
> 
> ‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑
> RFC5905 (draft‑ietf‑ntp‑ntpv4‑proto‑13)
> ‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑‑
> Title               : Network Time Protocol Version 4: Protocol and 
> Algorithms Specification
> Publication Date    : June 2010
> Author(s)           : D. Mills, J. Martin, Ed., J. Burbank, W. Kasch
> Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
> Source              : Network Time Protocols
> Area                : Internet
> Stream              : IETF
> Verifying Party     : IESG
> 
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