[ntpwg] Comments about draft-wu-ntp-ntp-cfg
Tal Mizrahi <talmi@marvell.com> Mon, 02 November 2015 09:51 UTC
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From: Tal Mizrahi <talmi@marvell.com>
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Subject: [ntpwg] Comments about draft-wu-ntp-ntp-cfg
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Hi, A couple of minor comments: 1. Please delete the "; on the following line: <mailto:eric.wu@huawei.com>"; 2. The current YANG model seems to include two data nodes: ntp-cfg and ntp-state. According to Section 4.9 of RFC 6087, there should be at most one top-level data node in a YANG data model. 3. The indentation throughout the YANG model (Section 4) is not accurately consistent with the hierarchies. Examples: See 3 lines above "container ntp-state" See 2 lines above "container multicast-server" Thanks, Tal.
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