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Re: [Ntp] WGLC: draft-ietf-ntp-refid-updates (Network Time Protocol REFID Updates)

Tal Mizrahi <tal.mizrahi.phd@gmail.com> Wed, 28 November 2018 10:10 UTC

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Date: Wed, 28 Nov 2018 12:09:59 +0200
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Subject: Re: [Ntp] WGLC: draft-ietf-ntp-refid-updates (Network Time Protocol REFID Updates)
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Hi,

A few comments:
- "I-DO" is mentioned a few times in the draft, but not defined or
specified. Some background is required, and also a citation of the I-DO
draft (if it is relevant).
- IANA Considerations:
    - Please clarify what you mean by "pseudo Extension Field Type" - does
this registry exist? There is a registry called "NTP Extension Field Types".
    - You requested the value 0xFFFF, which is also requested in the I-DO
draft. How is this conflict going to be resolved?
- There are a few informal-early-draft-oriented sentences, including a few
instances of "...", a few sentences in brackets [],
- The section "Questions" should be omitted at this point, as this is WG LC.
- As always, I suggest to add a general comment to the security
considerations section: "The security considerations of time protocols in
general are discussed in [RFC7384], and specifically the security
considerations of NTP are discussed in [RFC5905]."

Cheers,
Tal.


On Tue, Nov 6, 2018 at 11:05 PM Karen O'Donoghue <odonoghue@isoc.org> wrote:

>
> Folks,
>
> This message initiates a three plus week working group last call for:
>
> Network Time Protocol REFID Updates
> *https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ntp-refid-updates/
> <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ntp-refid-updates/>*
>
> Please review the referenced document and send any comments to the mailing
> list including your assessment of whether this document is mature enough to
> proceed to the IESG. Please note that these messages of support for
> progression to the mailing list will be used to determine WG consensus to
> proceed.
>
> Please send all comments in by COB on Friday 30 November. We realize this
> is a bit longer than normal but we are coming out of an IETF week and
> heading into the Thanksgiving holiday in the US.
>
> Thanks!
> Karen and Dieter
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