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[Ntp] Antw: [EXT] Re: Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-ietf-ntp-packet-timestamps-08: (with COMMENT)

Ulrich Windl <Ulrich.Windl@rz.uni-regensburg.de> Tue, 03 March 2020 07:34 UTC

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From: Ulrich Windl <Ulrich.Windl@rz.uni-regensburg.de>
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Subject: [Ntp] Antw: [EXT] Re: Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-ietf-ntp-packet-timestamps-08: (with COMMENT)
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>>> Tal Mizrahi <tal.mizrahi.phd@gmail.com> schrieb am 03.03.2020 um 06:52 in
Nachricht
<11168_1583214812_5E5DF0DC_11168_964_1_CABUE3X=6=UkYxbj_U1ZzU=zkc53n5Zm2rqp3Gq53
aUi=zP_BA@mail.gmail.com>:

[...]
> I suggest the following update:
> OLD:
> a timestamp is often used as a value that is unlikely to repeat (nonce)
> NEW:
> a timestamp is often used as part of a value that is unlikely to repeat 
> (nonce)

Maybe s/often/also/ ?

And wouldn't it be "is used often" instead of "is often used" (that work ordering is OK in Germsan, but I think not in English). And when we're at it: Maybe s/is used/(maybe|might be|could) used/ ?
[...]

Regards,
Ulrich

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