[nvo3] Document shepherd comments on draft-ietf-nvo3-mcast-framework-04

["Bocci, Matthew (Nokia - GB)" <[e-mail]>]

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I think this draft is mostly good to progress, but I have a few comments that I think should be addressed before I forward it to the IESG for publication.
I have also forwarded the draft to the chairs of the MBONED working group to see if it needs further review and will wait for their response before proceeding.

Here are my comments:

(1) Title:
“A Framework for Multicast in NVO3”
Please expand NVO3 in the title. Similar to the architecture draft, this might be better as “A Framework for Multicast in Data Centre Network Virtualisation Overlays (NVO3)”.

(2) Throughout: Please make sure you expand acronyms on first use, throughout, e.g. mDNS in the Introduction.

(3) Section 3, first paragraph.
This references STT. It might be better to reference the encapsulations that have been adopted by the working group (GUE, GENEVE, and VXLAN-GPE)  rather than an individual draft submission.

(4) Section 3.4, last paragraph:
S/main/maintain

(5) Section 9, References
You have split these into Normative and Informative references. However, you draft is informational, so I am not sure it makes sense to have any normative references. Further, you have included information documents such as the NVO3 architecture as normative references.
Please also include the full draft reference and version you are referencing (e.g. draft-ietf-nvo3-arch-03) rather than just the title of a draft.

(6) ID-Nits
Please can you run ID-Nits on the draft and clear any relevant errors and warnings.


Regards

Matthew